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![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 595 W: 55 N: 526]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-g-g.gif){kind=small}
AngeDazur
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 204 W: 4 N: 15]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-n-s.gif)
(2514) [2009-09-13 9:45]
(2514) [2009-09-13 9:45] Jadore cettr abstraction. Superbe courbe créée. Félicitation, Jean.
AngeDazur
(2514) [2009-09-13 9:43]
(2514) [2009-09-13 9:43] Belle simplicité dans cette composition epurée. Beau travail, Jean.
AngeDazur
(2514) [2009-09-13 9:36]
(2514) [2009-09-13 9:36] Nice capture. Would like a bit more sharpnees on its head. Would need to remove some noise in the background. Regards, Jean.
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 176 W: 10 N: 149]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-s-g.gif){kind=small}
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 66 W: 26 N: 2]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-s-n.gif){kind=small}
AngeDazur
(2514) [2009-09-13 9:21]
(2514) [2009-09-13 9:21] Interesting pose and location. Would crop the building on the rigth side of the frame. Regards, Jean.
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 29 W: 0 N: 31]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/s-n-s.gif){kind=small}
AngeDazur
(2514) [2009-09-13 9:20]
(2514) [2009-09-13 9:20] Creativ composition. Ligth too much contrasting. Copyrigth statement too much distractive. Regards, Jean.
AngeDazur
(2514) [2009-09-13 9:19]
(2514) [2009-09-13 9:19] no details on the butterfly. Too much busy composition. Regards, Jean.
![Silver Note Writer [C: 8 W: 0 N: 18]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/n-n-s.gif){kind=small}
AngeDazur
(2514) [2009-09-13 9:18]
(2514) [2009-09-13 9:18] Great ligth , soft and not flat. Would prefer a vertical crop and a bit less exposed background, Regards, Jean.
INteresting and creativ idea. THe ligth is too much contrastring. Regards, Jean.