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Greece
Title: Green soap
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Asiulus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 60 W: 11 N: 10] (113) [2009-11-20 1:49]

Sorry Andrew, but I can't see the reason for showing this. Sharp light, overexposed parts, strange pink tones, random composition, ordinary object - that all combined is just a coincidence to me, are you sure it was you who released the shutter?
You've got some really good shots in your gallery. The more I'm surprised you posted this.

Greece
Title: BIRDS
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artikos (2472)

Great

Asiulus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 60 W: 11 N: 10] (113) [2009-11-20 1:41]

Again, perfect moment captured. May I know what lens did you use?

Asiulus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 60 W: 11 N: 10] (113) [2009-11-20 1:39]

Beautiful - the mood, simplicity, composition...

Greece
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artikos (2472)

Great

Asiulus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 60 W: 11 N: 10] (113) [2009-11-20 1:38]

Perfect timing, good image quality. I think it would look good as vertical frame including only the birds, too.

Asiulus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 60 W: 11 N: 10] (113) [2009-11-20 1:35]

Nikos, please, don't do this again, poor animal is scared of this sudden flash straight in the eyes. And you've cut off his right paw.

Asiulus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 60 W: 11 N: 10] (113) [2009-11-20 1:34]

I'm not a fan of such colours, but it's a great shot anyway. Peaceful, simple, human.

Asiulus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 60 W: 11 N: 10] (113) [2009-11-20 1:30] [comment]

Świetnie powiększyłeś stwora :-)

Asiulus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 60 W: 11 N: 10] (113) [2009-11-20 1:17]

Not really. It's too small to judge, but the twigs in the background are drawing my attention from the main subject. Try to achieve shallower depth of field (there are many sites about it in Google) to blur the background and make the foregroung visible.
You should correct white balance (image is too blueish), make levels correction to make it punchier.

Asiulus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 60 W: 11 N: 10] (113) [2009-11-20 1:14]

Too much of everything, I don't know what to look at first. You could have worked on composition more. Colours would look better if you made it more contrasty by levels correction.
A note is recommended, too.

Asiulus Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 60 W: 11 N: 10] (113) [2009-11-20 0:16]

Beautiful light. I think you should have sharpened this image a bit, looks soft.