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Fleury Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 23 W: 4 N: 19] (181) [2008-06-16 6:54]

Woaw a very strong capture!

I really like your composition and contrast, but I think your photo would've been much, much stronger if you'd actually focussed on the eye itself. The eye is not sharp, which is a great let don for me. Especially in such a photo where the eye has to be the centre of interest, the eye itself has to be sharp! Unfortunately it is not....

Though this is a shame for a photo such as this one, you do have great composion and contrast in your shot and the black and white really works as well ^^ The ye should've been sharp though.

Regards, Fleury

Fleury Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 23 W: 4 N: 19] (181) [2008-06-16 6:43] [+]

A beautiful shot of a child's hand ^^

What I would've done with such a photo would be to make it black and white, but make the flower in the hand colour. This is called partial desaturation. It would make the flower jump out at the viewer and make the photo even more interesting than it already is ^-^

Just a suggestion. A really good photograph :D Keep up the good work.
Kind Regards, Fleury

Fleury Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 23 W: 4 N: 19] (181) [2008-06-16 6:40]

Lovely shot :D

Good work, the only point that could be improved is the depth of field. If you'd have changed this ever so slightly, the eyes of the fly would've actually been sharp. It is too bad that they are not sharp in this shot.
The colours and composition, however, are very good.

I hope you can improve your skills even more and you'll turn out amazing photos! ^^
Kind Regards, Fleury

Fleury Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 23 W: 4 N: 19] (181) [2008-06-16 5:58]

great shot :D
The composition and colours are really good, but I think that if you'd used a shorter shutterspeed that it would've been even better, because then you could've totally freezed his motion. This would've made a much crisper and much more intereesting shot ^-^

Nonetheless a good shot
Keep up the good work ^^
Kind Regards Fleury

Fleury Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 23 W: 4 N: 19] (181) [2008-06-13 4:02] [+]

Woaw! That is beautiful!
The eye is amazingly sharp and expressive ^-^ And the composition is really intelligent. It's just beautiful!

I don't have any points to improve on regretably, cause this is just amazing!
Really good work, keep it up ^^
Regards, Fleury

Fleury Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 23 W: 4 N: 19] (181) [2008-06-13 3:58]

Really nice photo :D It really cought my eye ^-^
I especially like the foggyness, which really softens the busy background. I also like the fact that it is a real action photo ^^

Nice capture, keep up the good work!
Regards, Fleury

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Fons Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1299 W: 2 N: 202] (15596)

Great

Fleury Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 23 W: 4 N: 19] (181) [2008-06-13 3:40]

Wat een schatje ^-^

Hij heeft prachtige ogen en de pose is ook erg mooi.
Het enige wat ik hierop kan aanmerken is eigenlijk het licht. De compositie is erg goed, alleen het lijkt alsof je een flits hebt gebruikt of de foto naderhand scherper hebt gemaakt. Dit creeert een witte gloed over hem en dat vindt ik een beetje jammer.
Dit hangt natuurlijk erg af van je smaak en misschien ligt het ook wel ana mijn beeldscherm.

Maar dus een prachtige foto!
Regards, Fleury

Fleury Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 23 W: 4 N: 19] (181) [2008-03-06 4:20]

Great composition and image!
A beautiful little girl looking right at you ^-^
You must've been very interesting to her XD

Good job!
Regards
Fleury ^-^

Fleury Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 23 W: 4 N: 19] (181) [2008-02-25 3:52]

Nice effect :D
The grainy-ness (if that's a word) bothers me a bit though O.o;
The colours are okay, but maybe if you made the pinks and reds come out a bit more you'd get a more extreme effect, which fits to the effect you've already created.

Still, I quite like this photo :D
Good work, keep it up
Regards
Fleury

Fleury Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 23 W: 4 N: 19] (181) [2008-02-25 3:31]

Woaw great composition! ^-^
A lovely portrait of a hard working woman and the exposure is fantastic!
Great perspective.... well great photo really :D
Keep up the amazing work!
Regards
Fleury ^-^