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KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 448 W: 103 N: 583] (2711) [2009-12-03 2:15] [+]

Hello Jone
Fantastic macro, excellent sharpness and great DOF.
I can guess there is a little pp work to reduce noise?

Beautiful presentation :)

TFS
Cheers
JZM

KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 448 W: 103 N: 583] (2711) [2009-12-03 2:10]

Hello Mikolaj
Very nice capture indeed
I like the partial reflection of sky in the windows.
Nice composition and good warm colors.

Nicely done
TFs
Cheers
JZM

KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 448 W: 103 N: 583] (2711) [2009-12-03 2:09]

Hello Necla
Beautiful colors, nice composition and very nicely exposed.

I like the warm colors in f/g and table with redish leaves.

Eye pleasing :)
TFS
Have a nice day too
Cheers
JZM

KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 448 W: 103 N: 583] (2711) [2009-12-02 9:35] [+]

Asalam o alikum haji sahab
This is a true example of exposure control along with a excellent sharpness.
Details r too good to see throughout the frame indeed!

Nicely metered, I am interested to know the shutter asa and apperture u've used here n how was the lighting situtation when u took this one?

A beautiful dedicaton :)
Stay safe
Regards
Jahanzeib Malik

KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 448 W: 103 N: 583] (2711) [2009-12-01 21:46] [comment]

Hello Bill
Quite an interesting story behind the photo :)
Ur title tells the story too LOL :)

Its very nice to have meetups and shoot together, we learn alot from other's experiences and offcourse other lessons too (101 ways)

U did a nice job here, the photo helps to understand the story and speak for itself :)

The thing i really don't like was the first two lines of ur note :(

Stay safe and happy shooting (thats all what i can say)

Cheers
JZM

KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 448 W: 103 N: 583] (2711) [2009-11-30 23:00]

Hello bro
A very well seen and capture, i particularly like the color combinations i.e ground, blue and prominent Red.

Red is always been an eye catching so ur choice of shooting RED shoes was great!
I'd say its not a centered composition as the shoes (ur main subject) falls in the 1/3 portion of ur frame n the leads in for blue from top is too good.

The focus is adequate and colors vibrance is eye pleasing :)

TFS
Cheers
JZM

KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 448 W: 103 N: 583] (2711) [2009-11-30 9:54]

Asalam o alikum bro
Congratulations :)
Nice to see that u've bought ur trusted Olympus, apart from my personal disliking of Olympus I have always appreciated the colors olympus delivers :)

well, hope to see ur faith in olympus ;)

You have done a very nice job by throwing more light on Amar's face which has really helped to avoid the distraction to be more peominent :)

stay safe
best
Jahanzeib

KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 448 W: 103 N: 583] (2711) [2009-11-29 6:03]

Hello.dustein
it's a very decent portrait of a pretty model
I like her hair style of old 80's
Composition is very strong and her eye contact engages my eyes
I am not sure abut her folded fingers, it gives the eexperssion like she's not comfortable, more over u might tried to clone out the two spots on her arm just my personal opinion :)

the veginating effects is a good use which prevents the text in the b/g to look prominent ;)

TFS
Cheers
JZM

KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 448 W: 103 N: 583] (2711) [2009-11-26 11:31]

hahahaha very well observation Jovie

I like the high POV and brown tones here, composition is good and exposure is very well controlled utelizing the natural light.
I am not sure what was ur ISO but u might have booseted it up to utilise fater shutter???

TFS
Cheers
JZM

KBE Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 448 W: 103 N: 583] (2711) [2009-11-26 11:28]

Hello Tricia
Loved the dark tones of the f/g stone and brick at the left.

Nice use of slow shutter (may be more slower would have delivered acurate smoky effects???)

Nicely composed and presented

TFS
Cheers
JZM