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LenScapp
(35) [2007-02-07 17:04]
Nice lighting on your model and good pose. As it is natural to read L to R our eyes are immediately focussed on the flowers which are a strong picture on their own. this means your beautiful model is having to compete with the flowers which is a great shame.
Barry
LenScapp
(35) [2006-11-24 11:22] - [workshop] [compare] [+]
Hi Huub
Only you can get away with an image where the person is on the extreme edge and walking out of the picture!! It works very well. The repetitive of the doors allow the eye to rest on the pilot nicely.
Barry
PS Have done WS just for fun. Hope you don't mind.

The exposure is very good but I find the shapes in the foreground a little uninteresting.
Barry