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(358) [2008-02-17 10:09] [+]Hi Muhammad,
Long time no see! I see you've made some wonderfull portrets the last few months. You say it's hard to photograph children, but I think you have a great talent of doing it!
I like the contrast in this photo, though some parts seem to be overlighted.
Keep up the good work!
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(358) [2007-05-24 16:25] [+]Hi Muhammad!
Wow, I just love this photo. It could be a photo from 50 or more years ago...
I've got only one point, I think I can see that you whitened the eyes of the girl. They are almost too white in my opinion. Which is also good because the eyes are 'popping' out of the picture, but with the 'old fashioned' idea, I think they are a little too white and bright.
Waiting for your reaction! ;)
Lieke
(358) [2007-05-18 2:23] Beautiful shot!!
The photo might be a bit bigger.
I really love the colors and the composition!
Great work!
Hi Muhammad,
Again, a great shot with a lovely model!
A golden rule in portret photography, at least ONE sharp eye...! Which is something I most of the time forget when I'm shooting :p
This is indeed also interesting, it seems like there could be a soft box, if it weren't here eyes, telling the viewer that the window is there..!
A little overlighted, but it doesnt really matter for the complete picture!
great job again!