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Nesa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 59 N: 23] (380) [2009-11-09 22:10] - [workshop] [compare]

Very candid shot. I hope you don't mind as did small WS. As your son is the main subject of the shot to keep him in forefront I cropped a shot a bit and added black frame, adj. contrast a bit to bring out colors of the sky and it's reflection.
(Not to exclude the other child which I am sure is dear to you as well, but for aesthetic purpose, pls. do not take offense).
I am surprised that this shot hadn't got its recognition, I guess people are not going, as I do, through and through to see the whole gallery of the photographer.
Nesa.

Nesa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 59 N: 23] (380) [2009-11-09 21:53]

I like this execution.
I do not know if you could chose a bit better background for this shot, and in this kind of shot it is though as subject is on the move - fast move.
TFS.

Nesa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 59 N: 23] (380) [2009-11-09 21:45]

Love the capture of the colors.

Nesa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 59 N: 23] (380) [2009-11-09 21:44]

Nice, in your place I would try a macro shot, perhaps with sun rays in back and few dew drops, or I am unrealistic,...? Perhaps I am, still would be nice to see if you had got some close up macro on those lovely blue bells.
Nesa.

Nesa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 59 N: 23] (380) [2009-11-09 21:33] [+]

Moment well preserved. Color red is so "loud" in here, contributing to the subject and movement of the image.

Nesa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 59 N: 23] (380) [2009-11-09 21:30] [+]

So well, spotted & framed.
TFS.

Nesa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 59 N: 23] (380) [2009-11-09 21:29] [+]

Hi Fernando,
I have not visited your gallery, nor TL, for a while as I was quite busy lately.
It is so nice, so refreshing, to see your exceptional work here. Thank you for sharing your vision and giving us further inspiration to work on the quality of our photography. There is nothing I can add to this as well as many other shots of yours but - Wow!!!

Nesa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 59 N: 23] (380) [2009-11-09 21:11]

:) humorous,well spotted and nicely captured.

Nesa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 59 N: 23] (380) [2009-11-09 21:10]

lovely macro with beautiful contrast of sky blue.

Nesa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 59 W: 59 N: 23] (380) [2009-11-09 21:09]

I like it very much, almost like a wonderland.
Good execution, keep on :).