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Neuro_Toxin Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 33 W: 51 N: 79] (283) [2009-11-24 8:54]

Hi
Good picture,Keya. Nice colours.I think ,with a lil more effort from your side, you can take still better photos. Except for the photos of people directly staring into the camera, its a goodd idea to place the subject slightly off centered.Also you can try providing a little "move into" / "look into" space for ur subject to the appropriate side , say, towards the right for this particular photo. As a general guide line,most compositions look stronger and beautiful if u can adhere to the "Rule Of Thirds". Hope it helps :)

Btw, you have a nice photo gallery :)


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-Neuro_Toxin

Neuro_Toxin Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 33 W: 51 N: 79] (283) [2009-11-22 3:18]

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Nice work,Sabo. AS Rew said , its a gud idea to provide a few lines of explanatory note regarding this photo.

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Neuro_Toxin Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 33 W: 51 N: 79] (283) [2009-11-19 7:27]

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Excellent capture,Angela.Beautiful colours.Good timing indeed :). Keep posting more

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Neuro_Toxin Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 33 W: 51 N: 79] (283) [2009-11-19 4:11] [+]

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Nice pose n portrait,Sabo Rustamova . Good perspective and colours,though slightly blurred. Also, u have cropped it too tight,especially on the left , (n right ) side.

BTW, is she a dancer?

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Neuro_Toxin Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 33 W: 51 N: 79] (283) [2009-09-08 21:28]

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Good photo,Gary. Well composed. Nice DOF and vibrant colours.The flower contrasts well with the smooth BG. Good work.

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-Neuro_Toxin

Neuro_Toxin Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 33 W: 51 N: 79] (283) [2009-09-07 22:31]

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Interesting photo, Otti Rapp .Thats too much of an intense " Red Eye " ,hehe.Some details are lost cos of the excess light,especially on the eyebrows and corners of the eye. However, its a Good PP work.

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Neuro_Toxin Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 33 W: 51 N: 79] (283) [2009-09-06 10:00]

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Nice photo,mariyah gaspacho . Good lighting,though its slightly more on the knuckle and fingers.Btw, whats the yellow tint extending from the ear to the chin? Is it part of the makeup?. I think its better to adjust the transparency ,and reduce the font size of the watermarking by one or two steps , so that it wont be distracting or become a part of the main subject itself .

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Neuro_Toxin Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 33 W: 51 N: 79] (283) [2009-09-06 6:15] [+]

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Beautiful picture, Arun. Nice colours and and a smooth BG.Well focussed. I think you can adjust the contrast slightly more .Btw, its a better idea to provide a lil more headroom to this pic,as u have cropped it tightly.I wud like to request you to have a look at the watermarking ,again.You have placed it at the centre of the image, where a viewr's immediate attention falls.Thats a distraction .Usually we write our names in such a way that it wont share or distract a viewer's attention from the main subject.If our photo is good, the viewers will definelty see who the photographer is,wont u agree?? .

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-Neuro_Toxin

Neuro_Toxin Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 33 W: 51 N: 79] (283) [2009-09-03 22:27] - [workshop] [compare] [+]

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Nice shot,Praveen. Excellent lighting and great colours.Good POV.Ive done a mild WS edit to enhance the contrast. Hope you like it.

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Neuro_Toxin Silver Star Critiquer/Gold Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 33 W: 51 N: 79] (283) [2009-09-03 22:14] [2]

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Beautiful shot, Mariana.Good details and vivid colours along with a smooth BG makes ths picture exceptionally beautiful.Good work. Keep posting more.


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