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Pentti Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 19 W: 47 N: 35] (278) [2009-11-12 12:10] - [workshop] [compare] [+]

Hi Marylou,
Nice feeling in the photo.
Your processing left it somewhat noisy. I try to make some more prosessing...
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Pentti Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 19 W: 47 N: 35] (278) [2009-10-31 14:24]

Hi Dilshan,
Great shot. Great composition.
Excellent!
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Pentti Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 19 W: 47 N: 35] (278) [2009-10-31 9:21] - [workshop] [compare]

Hi Krzysztof,
Beautiful model and great colours.
The line of benches is in riht place but the subject being in so centre is not optimal for a composition.
I just try some other possibility. Hope you don't mind.
Well done anyway.
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Pentti Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 19 W: 47 N: 35] (278) [2009-10-29 13:17] - [workshop] [compare] [+]

Hi Helena,
Nice feeling in your photo.
It could be more cropped and as already said some more contrast wouls help too.
Hope you don't mind me trying.
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Pentti Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 19 W: 47 N: 35] (278) [2009-10-28 13:21]

Hi Sunil,
As stated before this type of processing has great potential.
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Pentti Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 19 W: 47 N: 35] (278) [2009-10-28 13:20]

Hi Sunil,
I really like this (and the similar main street one too). The processing is is something special. Hope you continue with this type of posts.
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Pentti Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 19 W: 47 N: 35] (278) [2009-10-24 11:55]

Hi Sunil,

Beautiful colours (not over saturated)
Good composition
Looks natural
Well done!
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Pentti Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 19 W: 47 N: 35] (278) [2009-10-23 14:33] - [workshop] [compare]

Hi George,
A beautiful portrait.
I would have cropped this a bit more.
There seems to be some green colouring on the left side, probably from some artificial light.
Points for the composition.
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Pentti Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 19 W: 47 N: 35] (278) [2009-10-18 7:40] - [workshop] [compare] [+]

Hi Dilshan,

Lovely birds. Great tones. Thanks for a useful note. The birs could be sharper.

I haven't tried similar situation with my D90 but I could suppose that you next time use ISO 400 because the image with D90 at this sensitivity has very low noise (you could even use 640 if needed with satisfactory results).

I would have cropped more (I show you, hope you don't mind). With more cropping one could also better see how you managed with your try. Waiting for your next trial.

Have a nice evening.
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Pentti Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 19 W: 47 N: 35] (278) [2009-10-06 12:52] [+]

Hi Ronald,
What a lovely car ... and a photo too.
The contrast between the texture of crass and smooth glowing car gives this image a special tension.
At first sight I thought this might be done with some HDR kind of tone mapping. Don't know the filter you used but it works great.
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