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Title: Indoor
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Plant Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 62 W: 18 N: 46] (970) [2007-01-06 13:25]

Luca
Great, strong composition here. I like how the standing lamp and the door frame split the shot vertically into thirds. The desk and chair offer interest to the left, the centre is relatively empty, and the right is full of interest with great reflections.
A very well composed shot my friend.
Kindest regards
Paul

Plant Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 62 W: 18 N: 46] (970) [2006-12-27 3:29] [+]

Lesley
Great 'shot' ;o)
Compo is spot on, you could easily have gone to pot on this one and got it wrong. The graininess of the photo and the light hanging in mid air is right on cue.
Wonderful work.
Sorry about the pun-athon. Couldn't resist.
Loving your work.
Paul

Plant Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 62 W: 18 N: 46] (970) [2006-11-25 15:13] [+]

Bit of artistic licence used here giving Zippy one ear! I don't remember him having any. Apparently Jeffrey now stocks supermarket shelves for a living, how the mighty have fallen.
Great original idea for a photograph.
Paul

Plant Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 62 W: 18 N: 46] (970) [2006-11-19 14:14] [+]

Classic, I have never been so scared of one so short! The shallow DOF would have been perfect if the eyes had been a bit sharper. Still an interesting picture though.
Paul

Plant Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 62 W: 18 N: 46] (970) [2006-11-11 14:23] [+]

Nice one matey. The central horizon works well here owing to the reflections, and the burn of the sun is just right, you don't arf like your borders don't you :o)
Paul

Plant Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 62 W: 18 N: 46] (970) [2006-11-10 14:30]

Hi Saulius
Great first post, an interesting subject and a strong composition, there is lots to look at in the picture. I particularly like the position of the bridge. The colours are good too.
Welcome to TL.
Paul

Plant Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 62 W: 18 N: 46] (970) [2006-11-03 14:29] [+]

Hi Flavia
Nice tones and colours here, I like the high contrast. This is an interesting photograph. Just one point, I probably would have cloned out the dots at the top left of the photo and perhaps the mark under the black key.
Best Wishes
Paul

Plant Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 62 W: 18 N: 46] (970) [2006-10-28 12:35]

Nice one Bill, well spotted. But where's the shamrock?
Paul

Plant Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 62 W: 18 N: 46] (970) [2006-10-16 14:53]

Love this one, I think if it had been cropped to a square it would have been 'too geometric'. As it is the repetition in the rectangle is great. No wonder you had a bad back.
Paul

Plant Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 62 W: 18 N: 46] (970) [2006-10-16 14:32] [+]

Not too sure about the white sky on this one, Neil. I like the trees and the repetitive nature of the sculpture. However, I think that a blue sky and so a sunny morning would have lifted the picture giving a more 3D effect. I think the light was a little too flat, a case of right place, wrong light. Perhaps you could take it again on a different day.
Not too harsh a critique I hope, Paul.