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Tenfold Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 86 W: 15 N: 144] (920) [2009-07-14 3:29] [+]

Hi Sergio
Beautiful scene with nice old sepia tones. A well considered foreground.
Cheers

Joris

PS: I'll see you again in a month. I'll be coming your way; holiday in Rio de Janeiro starting this week!

Tenfold Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 86 W: 15 N: 144] (920) [2009-07-14 3:23]

You're certainly into lavender, aren't you. Nice POV and superb sharpness and depth. The composition with the wide background is sensibly chosen.

Cheers

Joris

Tenfold Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 86 W: 15 N: 144] (920) [2009-07-14 1:37]

Superb composition and sharpness.
Good use of the rule of third.
The red stands out beautifully.
Good capture.

Cheers

Joris

Tenfold Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 86 W: 15 N: 144] (920) [2009-07-14 1:31]

Nice expansive panorama. The dead bush to the right adds greatly to the image. Impressive sky.
Maybe a closer crop would have worked better. Than I would lose the left part of your photo (with the white that are very close to overexposed). But I would include the darker shape in the middle, the dead bush and the most distant mountains. You could go for a larger format too than. But this is all personal taste. The photo stands as it is. Good work

Joris

Tenfold Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 86 W: 15 N: 144] (920) [2009-07-14 1:25]

Good low POV. The slanting BG makes for an interesting composition. The red on the head scarf stands out amazingly.
I wonder what the dish would be called... Sandy Fish, Crispy Chunk, Sun Baked Mudfish?...

Cheers

Joris

Tenfold Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 86 W: 15 N: 144] (920) [2009-07-14 1:20]

Interesting POV and dynamic picture. I can almost imagine a giant wave cresting the rock the moment after you took this image. Good choice to include the mountain top. Makes for a more interesting horizon. Nice simple frame.

Cheers

Joris

Tenfold Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 86 W: 15 N: 144] (920) [2009-07-14 1:17]

Your composition is very nice. I like the close crop on the curtains. They make for a very original frame. The wide angled view is a very good and sensible choice. The yellow colours and the subtle reflections on the floor are soothing to the eye. Like the ceiling.
Cheers

Joris

Tenfold Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 86 W: 15 N: 144] (920) [2009-07-14 1:04] [+]

I think the view, the compo, colours and crop gives you all the credit, very nice and well seen and composed!!
But the sharpness could have been better. And I would like to know what you did with the horizon... It stands of unnaturally sharp in comparison to the rest of the image.
All the best

Joris

Tenfold Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 86 W: 15 N: 144] (920) [2009-07-14 0:58]

Stunning view and good compo. I like the bending horizon. But I believe the colours are a bit oversaturated.

Cheers

Joris

Tenfold Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 86 W: 15 N: 144] (920) [2009-07-14 0:51]

Much better than your original post, Mikolaj! The paper in the upper right corner is better placed and there's more sharpness to this one since you made your crop wider.
Nice and tasteful presentation.

Cheers

Joris