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Unicorn1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 78 W: 3 N: 147] (1004) [2009-10-23 9:58] [+]

Hello John
Very well presented scene. I like the close up of the Triumph badge. Good clrarity and colours, the chrome bars of the rad are particularly well captured.
Regards, Les
p.s. give me a Renown, much better proportions!

Unicorn1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 78 W: 3 N: 147] (1004) [2009-10-19 13:44]

Hello Douglas
I like the focus on the eyes, and I think f5 works well, he looks quite a 'soft' animal (in more ways than one) and your focus has shown this to great effect.
Well presented too.
Regards, Les
ps my wife wants two of these little fellows!

Unicorn1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 78 W: 3 N: 147] (1004) [2009-10-19 0:45]

Hello Brian
Very good use of the light, and the angle of those railings is spot on. Like Jon this shot makes me want to go and visit the place too!
Regards, Les

Unicorn1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 78 W: 3 N: 147] (1004) [2009-10-18 7:39] [+]

Hello Ferenc
I like the light and colour of the sky, makes the clock tower stand out nicely, nice and sharp too. It seems quite small, maybe you need to check your image sizes before posting. Like Andy, a small note would also be nice to go with the shot. A good night shot.
Regards, Leslie

Unicorn1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 78 W: 3 N: 147] (1004) [2009-10-06 0:54]

Hello Mark
I like the presentation here, the panoramic effect is good and lends itself to the subject. Good use of the polarizer too. One of the most photographed places in the UK, but still rewarding when you get a good shot.
Regards, Leslie

Unicorn1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 78 W: 3 N: 147] (1004) [2009-09-30 0:46]

Hello Werner
I like the pov here, the caboose through the window reminds us we are outside and actually on the railway. The deatils of the controls are nice and shap given this is hand held at 1/2. This looks very different to a British steam loco!
Regards, Leslie

Unicorn1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 78 W: 3 N: 147] (1004) [2009-09-21 13:35]

Hello Ricki
It's hard to judge shots of moving trains, they always look bigger in the viewfinder, and it's all to easy to take the shot too soon. Your comp is good, and would be even better if the left hand rails lead directly into the corner of the shot: And the engine is centered in the frame - not a problem if it's hauling a train - but this one isn't. You have captured the smoke very well, and you chose a good pov for your shot.
Best regards, Leslie

Canada
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Unicorn1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 78 W: 3 N: 147] (1004) [2009-09-21 13:26]

Hello yvan
I like the well balanced comp here, the sepia tones have added to the atmosphere. I like the fact that there is nothing 'modern' to distract from the scene.
Regards, Leslie

Unicorn1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 78 W: 3 N: 147] (1004) [2009-09-17 13:57]

Hello Ra Fer
I like this a lot, especially the light, very well handled. I find the details at the top of the frame (above the door) a little distracting and maybe would have cropped these out. The seperate carriages and the repeated lines curving away to the left provide a great focal point.
Regards, Leslie

Unicorn1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 78 W: 3 N: 147] (1004) [2009-09-17 12:25]

Hello Bri
This is nice and sharp at 1/60, I'd need a tripod these days! Great colours and details, I woluld have been tempted to clone out the other reg plate to the left, although your pp has worked well with the chrome refelctions. very nice machine!
Regards, Les