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(0) [2007-03-01 22:57] [+]Salut Robert!
Tes dernières photos de navires sont incroyable. Bravo! Merci pour ta visite sur San-Fran. Donc tu sais ce que j'ais vécus. ;o)
As-tu vue ma dernière gallery, SSS? a www.pbase.com/zorroii. Tu devrais aimer. ;o)
A+
Ben.
PS: Mes salutations à ta charmante épouse!
(0) [2007-02-08 9:19] [+]Great representation on image of a ruff winter mister Baron.
Composition: 9/10 (Subject positioning, crop, pov)
Creativity: 8/10 (Originality, usage of imagination, thinking outside the box)
Rigor: 9/10 (Sharpness, Exposure, PP, Presentation,)
It’s difficult to calibrate a fogy atmosphere and you did it very well.
Exploitation of the light 9/10
Statement 9.5/10 (Ability of communicating an idea, a mood, a message with the image)
My humble assessment.
Cheers!
(0) [2007-02-07 12:15] Hi Vandana,
Now that's photography.
In all fairness, you would benefit and gain a great deal by going back to this method of post processing. I like the simple frame here.
Composition: 9/10 (Subject positioning, crop, pov)
Creativity: 8/10 (Originality, usage of imagination, thinking outside the box)
Rigor: 9/10 (Sharpness, Exposure, PP, Presentation,)
Exploitation of the light 9/10
Statement 8.5/10 (Ability of communicating an idea, a mood, a message with the image)
My humble assessment.
Cheers!
PS: So now that I'm being honest and nice, do I get a reply or maybe a visit on one of my post or is it too much to ask?
(0) [2007-02-07 10:22] [comment] - [workshop] [compare] [+]Hey Linda!
Forgive me for being honest but enough deer pictures ok? Unless you find a very creative way to compose, a particular light, a different backdrop, some fog, an interaction between two of them, you've seen one, you've seem them all.
I agree with Fisher on the hooves and the centered.
Cheers!
Ben.
(0) [2007-02-06 23:24] Félicitation pour tes 2 ans.
Tu restes un icone, une référence et surtout un exemple pour les membres de TL.
Salut!
Ben.
(0) [2007-02-06 23:22] Je ne suis pas trop fan des cadre 3D, mais en voila un bien réussi et surtout bien dosé.
Superb graphic work. You should present it to the event planners. They could certainly use it for promotion.
Composition: 9/10 (Subject positioning, crop, pov)
Creativity: 9/10 (Originality, usage of imagination, thinking outside the box)
Rigor: 9/10 (Sharpness, Exposure, PP, Presentation,)
Exploitation of the light 9/10
Statement 9/10 (Ability of communicating an idea, a mood, a message with the image)
My humble assessment.
Cheers!
(0) [2007-02-06 16:17] I don’t think that the saturation is the issue here but more the compression factor. Likely the result of multiple saving in jpeg format but compression for sure.
I recommend converting your picture to tiff before pp. This way there is no compression if you save it more than once. The noise in the faces of the childrens really is unacceptable for the D70s. And I’m not talking about the smoke.
Also. There is too much unnecessary pp. The blur back ground for example.
Why not using a shorter dof instead? The odd edges around the pots shows an deficiency in your pp work.
POV. I would have like to see the woman’s face as well and I see a perfect angle for that.
My bottom line advise. Try to limit your pp work. From what I have seen of your work in general, pp is the most negative element of your photography. You have a great sensibility and a good eye. Don’t let the tech aspect rune that.
I hope that my comment can benefit everybody that didn’t notice those issues.
Goodbye and many thanks BK!
Ben.