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akeeler Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 37 W: 46 N: 118] (1193) [2009-07-13 11:38] [+]

Great shot Jan... Lighting is superb!

I'm familiar wih the Batavia story, so it's very interesting to see what the ship really looked like.

If you haven't read it already I can recommend "The Company" by Arrabella Edge. It's a novel set around wreck of the Batavia, from the point of view the survivors. Fiction, but very evocative of the horror of the true story.

akeeler Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 37 W: 46 N: 118] (1193) [2009-06-14 12:45]

This is certainly a more naturalistic effect Brain, it works very well. It's still identifiable as a an HDR by it's even tones and characteristic crispness, but it's a very acceptable outcome I think.

On the subject of "overcooking" things, I always find I need to reduce the yellow channel saturation quite a lot on my HDR's. Certainly any that have vegetation in them. I find that I can often get away with leaving some of the other colours more intense, if the greens and yellows don't scream at you.

akeeler Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 37 W: 46 N: 118] (1193) [2009-06-13 11:42]

Wow Anna, this is terriffic! (And I think the best one yet in your gallery)

The tonal range of the dark sky, contrasted agaisnt the sand is very effective, and the dramtic composition of the foreground really suits such a dramatic backdrop.

A very high standard of work

akeeler Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 37 W: 46 N: 118] (1193) [2009-06-13 11:34]

Nice shot Brian...Great colour palette and contrast.

I think I'd like it a little touch sharper, but other than that it's grand.

akeeler Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 37 W: 46 N: 118] (1193) [2009-06-13 11:30] [+]

Just brilliant Ron in all respects!... I am sick with jealousy!!!!!!!!!

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isa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 353 W: 50 N: 687] (4071)

Great

akeeler Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 37 W: 46 N: 118] (1193) [2009-06-05 11:50] [+]

How funny Isa! Both our shots posted so close together, with same subject, same framing and style!...We have a saying here "great minds think alike"

I really like the ripple of the leaf in this shot, and the richness od the dark green, against the background.

Very well done.

Andy

akeeler Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 37 W: 46 N: 118] (1193) [2009-04-29 13:32]

A very cool shot Jan.....Did you have to use any noise reduction software on this afterwards?

akeeler Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 37 W: 46 N: 118] (1193) [2009-04-27 13:30] [+]

A great 1st HDR Jon...(Better than most of mineI'm afaird!)

Really excellent result on the car and the soil, but a little light in the sky. Some selective darkeing in PS would fix this nicely.

TFS
Andy

akeeler Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 37 W: 46 N: 118] (1193) [2009-04-19 2:02]

Fabulous capture Martyn...the soft tonal graduations work really well. And I like the gold. A stunning view.

Forgive me for saying that the title looks a little "clumsy" (can't think of a better word for it) superimposed over the image though. Maybe in a frame area, or with a lighter weight of font would be better.

akeeler Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 37 W: 46 N: 118] (1193) [2009-03-30 14:57] - [workshop] [compare]

Really Striking Shot Hans...Great work on the exposure.

Interestingly I thought of adding colour too..but cold blue for me.