PhotoCritique [Translate]
Hi Mate,
Quite scary for an innocent child to have the real one, good your mention its a toy gun.
Good eye to spot this young lady. I Like the Depth of Field and the sharpness of your subject.
TFS
Andy
A very sad and touching story of life in the street. You shown here the reality of some unfortunate people in our country. I sympathized with them.
Lack of job opportunity and education that lead to poverty is one of may reasons why there's so many like them in Manila.
My family were once live in the street due to same fate, with the help of relatives were able to recover and live normally.
Another photojournalism type of shot. Simple but tells significant story.
TFS,
Andy
You have a creative mind Pare, and great skills as an Artist as well. Congrats in your 2nd yr at TL. Keep posting.
Andy
Excellent composition Pare. I love the vividness of the image plus the aging texture of the structure and paving. It seems abandoned structure. There is something below the palm tree (blue color) that attracts my attention. Otherwise, beautiful.
Andy
oyy bagong model, maganda syempre lighting, pero masyadong madaming burloloy yung model, LOL. siguro dapat tangalin yung jacket para less yung obstruction.
Try mo mag pose ng close cropping Pre.
Andy
I recognized the place that is where we pass through going to PICC from LRT.
Sad but it always happen in most places in manila. Your in to photojournalism now? Simple image to many people but tells story to those imaginative person.
How's your visit in the Phils? I miss the rain where I stay at the moment.
beautiful Mate, love the color and composition.
The horizon is quite skew, but its understandable co'z you have used 18mm focal length. As you have mention f/3.5 is not the appropriate with the landscape shot, either f/8 or higher which will give more detail on the subject. But it looks ok to me, i believed you have sharpen the image abit.
Your not just good in portraiture but with landscape shot as well.
Andy

Its beautiful Magda. To me it was perfectly executed, co'z its not easy to take picture of a child but very much rewarding when you got the right shot.
TFS
Andy