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atomas59 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 435 W: 406 N: 299] (2334) [2009-12-03 20:25]

Hi Rew,
You've come a long way since your first post. One think is interesting about you, which is explore. This quite a nice shot. Gaya seems at ease, and the mood really comes thru.
The eyes and face is a little soft, tho it soften the facial feather, I would rather, make sure the the eyes are always sharp, it is after all part of our nature, to automaticly goes for the eyes. As where the human presence lays.

The pose is nice and relaxe, really like the mood. Well done.

atomas59 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 435 W: 406 N: 299] (2334) [2009-12-03 14:40] [+]

Hi Rew,
Technicly, everythings has been done right, well manage lighting, the hair light is maybe a touch to strong, but as the rest, no harsh of weird shadows.

Nice black background, maybe a halfstop under, would be nice to see a touch of detail in the black dress, althought I like those deep black, the dress is a little dark, velour with give you those no details black.

As for the pose I really like it, it kind of a classic.

My only worries would be the hands, I would have suggest the model just before taking the shots, to just relaxe, the hands, no need to extend the fingers, who could be nice too, but going back to the hands, it looks to me, like one of the hand, is really "grabbing" the other one, when I get to that part of the image, it really "grab" my attention. It's the tension part of the image, and attention should be about the rest, that looks relaxe, with a feel of almost floating.

None of the less, quite a nice job...))) Cheers

atomas59 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 435 W: 406 N: 299] (2334) [2009-12-02 21:00]

Hi Teresat,

What an intense picture. Really like how you've work with the space, using that bright red gardement. It's quite well composed and executed. Right exposure, nicelly high saturated colors, just as I like it. The off scheme skin color, is quite interesting, and set a special mood. ( hard to describe the feeling of it...))) so I won't. Well done.

atomas59 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 435 W: 406 N: 299] (2334) [2009-12-02 20:54]

Hi Trudy,
I really like this type of detailed pictures. Great, intense colors, that red really comes at you and clash well with those deep blacks. Well expose, and great tones. A very colorfull shot, full of expression. Well done.

atomas59 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 435 W: 406 N: 299] (2334) [2009-12-02 20:50]

This is quite an original portrait you're showing today. Genuine, sincere expression comming out of the subject. Certainly the mood is there. Very good handleing of the studio light, very interesting and well lite background. Quite different color, but so nice, really suit this setting. A little yellow in the shadow area, but I like it as is. Using gold reflectors? Well done....as usual...))) Very nice sharpness and quality picture.

P.s.Thanks for your honesty while viewing my pics..))) Really appreciated. Cheers.

atomas59 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 435 W: 406 N: 299] (2334) [2009-12-02 20:41]

Hi Mariana,
This is a very vivid graphique shot. Beautifull colors and tones. A real of center composition, but quite well manage, using the weights of the shape and form. The black window really consolidate it ( the composition..))).
Nice work, good exposure and nice definition.

atomas59 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 435 W: 406 N: 299] (2334) [2009-12-02 20:32] [+]

I've been a little busy the past time, quite a pleasure, to visit you again, and fine a brand new theme. This shot make me think of the Lousiana Bayou, that kind of feel, althought I'm pretty sure, it's got be somewhere else; I haven't read your note yet...))) It's quite a nice blend of form and patterns, it's quite busy, but I really like this.

As always....good exposure, and definition. Well balance colors with good saturation..Keep up the good work...)))

atomas59 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 435 W: 406 N: 299] (2334) [2009-12-02 20:19]

Hi Yopie,
I really like this composition, the lower angle you've choosen to shoot this, also the human presence in ths shot. Quite rustic, but letting us see a new reality in some other part of the world.
It's an interesting picture, full of mood.

Right exposure, nice saturated color (well balanced). This image is sharp, crisp, with good depth and definition. Well done.

atomas59 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 435 W: 406 N: 299] (2334) [2009-11-23 17:52]

Interesting shot Linday, Nice control over the light effect. A little grainy, which I don't mind. Well expose. Nice monochromatic scheme of colors. Unusual scene and composition. But as usual, with a style, that is trully yours. Well done.

atomas59 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 435 W: 406 N: 299] (2334) [2009-11-23 17:46] [+]

I went to Paris in '94. What a wonderfull city.
Funny how an image can trigger some far away memories. This shot remind me exactly the first time I saw the famous eiffel tower. I was about as far from it then the picture, with the building hiding it's base. As far as I'm concern, in Paris I felt at home, and would had willingly spend the rest of my life there. But hey that's me.

On the technical sense, I think you could have improve on quality, by just opening the window..))) I don't particuly like the logo..it's a nice logo, but it does wicken the shot a little.