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claudius (36) [2006-08-09 7:28]

Hello,
What I like about the photo are the very thin clouds that seem to align with the electricity wires.
Having said that, it might be a good idea to crop the photo a bit and change levels/gradation/contrast to work out this geometrical allignment stronger.
Best wishes,
Claudius

claudius (36) [2006-08-03 12:27]

Dear Jenny,
I like to photo very much. It is just border-walking between representative and abstract - wonderfully subtle!
It is a great art to convert the everyday and trivial in something beatiful and meaningful. You have achieved it here.
Best wishes,
Claudius

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claudius (36) [2006-07-28 10:06]

Hello Muhammad,
I like the photo for the friendly scene of the men sitting together but also because of the colours: the red of the curtain and green of the wall provide a pretty and striking contrast. the bicycles seem to tell a little story (something I appreciate most in photos) of how the people got to the place. This triggers your imagination.
nice photo!
best wishes
Claudius

claudius (36) [2005-08-05 10:55]

Great composition. You have put everything in the right spot, the mast, the open blue sky.
The whole pic creates a mystical atmosphere something along the lines "technology versus Nature".
Great.
Claudius

claudius (36) [2005-08-05 10:53] [+]

the colour is fantastic. I am not sure about the pink frame. I think it detracts from the flower.
very nice shot.
Claudius

claudius (36) [2005-08-05 10:51]

just a happy picture! I would have cropped the pic at the bottom so that the diagonal line, left to right, finishes off nicely in a corner.
cheers,
Claudius

claudius (36) [2005-08-04 7:59]

hello Jonathan,
great photo, good composition and wonderful colours! I only wonder whether it might have been beneficial to put vertical machine piece clearly out of center. As it is, it's neither deadcenter nor more towards the edge, which might have created a bit more tension.

Cheers,
Claudius

claudius (36) [2005-07-29 8:43]

Hi Johanna,
very nice photo. I don't think though that the design of the street light qualifies as art nouveau (turn of the 19 to 20th century), but rather looks like "rocaille", a rokoko ornament. The street light might well be from the end of the 19th century...