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davido Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 90 W: 9 N: 25] (332) [2006-07-21 11:16] [+]

I found there are some positive elements in your shot : the treatment of light (I like the small streetlam on the child's back), the colours and aspect of silk. On the other side I would have liked to see another point of view of the girl's face as her paintings look great. What is she handling with her hands ?

davido Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 90 W: 9 N: 25] (332) [2005-12-09 13:22] [+]

Cette photo mérite plus qu'un simple blabla.
J'aime beaucoup les photos très sombres. Surtout lorsqu'il y a un fort contraste avec une source de lumière. Ici le sujet est bien cadré, rien de coupé donc c'est plutôt pas mal réalisé ! Le seul truc sur lequel je suis pas tout à fait satisfait c'est au niveau de l'expressivité de la photo. Par exemple si on avait pu même qu'entr'apercevoir les yeux de ce chien ça aurait apporté un plus à mon avis. Genre des yeux dangereux tu vois ? Remarque on pourrait aussi bien dire que le fait de pas voir son visage à quelque chose d'effrayant, mais je trouve que c'est quand même dommage. T'as fait d'autres essais malgré le fait que tu as pris fissa la photo ?

davido Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 90 W: 9 N: 25] (332) [2005-11-21 12:30] [+]

Bonjour Alper
I bet this will be very viewed by TE followers.
Composition is very interesting with the soft textures.
Thx for sharing

davido Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 90 W: 9 N: 25] (332) [2005-10-23 6:24]

Bonjour Tomasz,
This is a clever composition with three rounds/three lights, and a nice contrast between shadows and lights. This is a bit mathematical for me, but nevertheless I appreciate.

Portugal
Title: Lisbon
Lisbon (34)
fer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 791 W: 131 N: 909] (8073)

Great

davido Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 90 W: 9 N: 25] (332) [2005-10-23 6:12]

Bonjour Fernando,
Here is a sublime view of the Portuguese capital. You definitly caught more than a view, an atmosphere with this heavy cloud that is very well framed. A soft light over the district makes feel the life so sweet. And beyond the city, the sea...

davido Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 90 W: 9 N: 25] (332) [2005-09-27 7:42]

Bonjour Vera,
This is a very nice PP work with the man between light and shadow. I like the theme and how you create this feeling of curiosity for the dark side of life.
Regards, David

davido Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 90 W: 9 N: 25] (332) [2005-09-26 12:26]

Bonjour Recep,
I don't only like the reflection on the wall, but also the beautiful (natural?) light and the lines and colours of the wall.
Regards, David

davido Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 90 W: 9 N: 25] (332) [2005-09-26 12:25] [+]

Bonjour Daniel,
This is an excellent portrait with the nice lights on the wall. I just love them. I like your choice of black and white here to give the feeling of an old movie scene as written in the note. What is carrying the man between his hands ?
Regards, David

davido Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 90 W: 9 N: 25] (332) [2005-09-26 12:20] [+]

Bonjour Pablo,
This is a very nice framing and natural colours are superb. Nice to see the clouds and the bright blue hole of the sky reflected on the object.
Regards, David

davido Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 90 W: 9 N: 25] (332) [2005-09-26 12:17]

Bonjour Nino,
I usually appreciate very much your work with this new style that now is yours. However, I dislike the turquoise dominant colour in this shot although I think your aim was to show that the underground was a right aquarium !
Regards, David