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deryk (15) [2006-04-07 16:39]

Good picture! I like the 4 birds with the 4 columns.

deryk (15) [2006-04-06 3:11] [+]

A great picture what can I say more? Innocence is what comes to my mind. The beautiful little face against the white fur...
TFS

Deryk

deryk (15) [2006-04-06 3:09]

I love all of your MOMENT serie pictures. Great work. For some of the pictures you can use platic glass maybe, or some kind of unbreakable glass, it would save you some to actually drink in it!
Great colors, very original, and perfect timing
tfs

deryk (15) [2006-04-04 23:58] [+]

Good shot. I like the pose. Very vibrant color and nice settings. As for the foot, I personnaly would either take more of it, or remove it completely. Also I would have taken more to the left, not necessarily the whole body but a little more, I find that it's cut too close to the head. Thanks for sharing.
Deryk

deryk (15) [2006-03-30 2:45]

Hello! Welcome to TL! Very nice picture there, I like the Point Of View. Louvre has been photographed many times, but this one is not too many! Good job!

Deryk

deryk (15) [2006-03-29 12:31]

Great picture. Very nice perspective, and the colors are so good, gradient sky and gradient pillar. tfs

Deryk

deryk (15) [2006-03-29 0:24]

Dramatic sky, well lit building, almost like a spotlight on it. Great picture!
regards
Deryk

deryk (15) [2006-03-28 14:28]

Very nice colors. would have been better if crayons were more in focus, and top right object (eraser?) either all in or completely out of the picture.

deryk (15) [2006-03-28 14:12]

A pretty classmate you've got there.
Very good lighting and composition. The girl is very natural and the grain is a nice touch in this case.
regards

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deryk (15) [2006-03-24 0:30]

Vibrant colors, good POV. I like the duality there. The two girls so natural. Very nice picture!
Deryk