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(202) [2008-07-06 21:30] Excellent Point of view. The colour combination is really nice.
A slightly longer DOF would have been nice, to try and get the face in focus.
All in all I like it
Regards
(202) [2008-07-06 21:12] Nice photograph Gaetan.
It must be quite difficult to photograph fireworks I have never tried. Please tell us more.
Regards
Johan Swanepoel
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(202) [2008-07-06 21:01] [+]Hi Joel,
My first impression is that it is a nice picture.
So when you asked for critique I had a nother look.
Using three objects is a good idea. The placement of the glaces are also pretty good.
I think the cropping top and sides is a bit tight. Possibly the DOF is a bit shallow, and you could try have something different in one of the glasses. Like a lemon/straw/water... This is where playing with it comes in.
One last comment would be the bright reflection of the table, it may be a tad bright and definitely attracts all the attention. Because of that the other two glases may seem in the way.
Hope this helps
Regards
Johan Swanepoel
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(202) [2007-01-13 14:21] Great shot.
The photo has a lot of mood, well captured.
Regards
Johan
(202) [2006-10-24 11:05] :-)
Well spotted. Excellent photo, well done.
Nice contrast and it is a tad funny.
TFS
Johan
(202) [2006-10-24 10:55] Nice colours and excellent exposure. The golden relfection on the water is also good.
Composition wise the shot is a tad central, read up on the rule of thirds. It would make the shot a lot stronger if the top was cropped of a bit.
Well done and thanks for sharing
Johan
(202) [2006-10-24 10:53] Nice food photo.
You make me hungry with this pic. I supoose that is the benchmark in food photography. If if makes your mouth water then it is good.
So to you, well done I am off to grab a bite.
Regards
Johan
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(202) [2006-10-24 10:51] Nice picture.
The way you have captured mood in this photograph is amazing. It makes you think of an old poor village and the rich folks on the boat just checking the place out.
Thanks for sharing
Johan
(202) [2006-10-24 10:50] Nice composition.
You have applied and interesting effect.
TFS
Johan
Hi,
The photograph stands out nicely, well done. The composition with the placement of the flower is good.
The only possible critique could be that the photo can be sharper.
All in all well done