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eMBeer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 266 W: 58 N: 221] (1420) [2009-09-18 15:19] [+]

Witaj Moniko,

ojj.... zgadzam sie z notka bc_the_path... My znamy Lebe... ale ktokolwiek kto nie zna, nie bedzie mial pojecia o skali tych wydm... No i troche ze swiatlem Ci nie wyszlo chyba... :-( Jakos tak plasko, bez wyraznych ksztaltow... ENYŁEJS - i tak zachwyca mnie wiekszosc Twoich prac... A ta? Coz, kazdemu sie moze przydarzyc wpadka... ;-PPP trudno...

cieple pozdrowki

Marek

eMBeer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 266 W: 58 N: 221] (1420) [2009-09-17 13:07]

Hi Jahanzeib,

excellent result of panning experiment. Makes me think of trying to do the same :-)

Marek

eMBeer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 266 W: 58 N: 221] (1420) [2009-09-16 23:04]

Hi Jeff,

I always loved long exposure times in such situations. But here is something really rare - usually the water looks silky. Here it looks like a mist? A fog? Upper part of the shot is so reral - botom part like taken from a fairy tale. The light is beautiful. tfs

Marek

eMBeer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 266 W: 58 N: 221] (1420) [2009-09-16 23:00]

Hi Vlad,

Beautiful, beautiful! Just beautiful! You mak me want to go there immediately posting such photos!

Very well composed, with excellent balance - so easy to watch at - the eyesight just slides across the picture. tfs

Marek

eMBeer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 266 W: 58 N: 221] (1420) [2009-09-16 22:56]

Hi Erbil,

I like the dynamics here. I like her concentration. I like the backlight separating her from unnice background. I dislike slightly to visible blur on her. I dislike the object on the left, in the fg (this could be corrected by tight crop on the left which would strenghten the photo creating high assymetry). Anyways I like it. tfs

Marek

Pakistan
Title: Gang
Gang (1)
mamcg Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 216 W: 51 N: 162] (4575)

Good

eMBeer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 266 W: 58 N: 221] (1420) [2009-09-16 22:51]

Hi Muhammad,

I like the concept of this photo - it matches the title and speaks quite strongly. The weakening issue is to much visible blur - would be much better if you used shorter shutter speed, even at cost of significat underexposition. tfs

Marek

eMBeer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 266 W: 58 N: 221] (1420) [2009-09-16 22:44]

Hi Jousse,

beautiful colours, beautiful landscape, beautiful composition. I like your POV where you have hidden the brightest part of the sky behind the dune obtaining quite uniform light across the whole shot. tfs

Marek

eMBeer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 266 W: 58 N: 221] (1420) [2009-09-16 22:39] [+]

Hi Linda,

I like this photo. It tells accurrately the story you described. I like the way you postprocessed it, achieving dersired results. I have read Vlad's note and I think he is right speaking of pixelation on skin of he blonde guy. This was the first thing I have noticed and I must say it disturbes. It makes impression that this particular person was added in postprocessing which creates the feeling the photo could be fake. As of the bollard: for me it helps. Placed in fg it makes a natural separator of that world (within the frame) from my world (apart of the world of the boy of course!) looking like casual unwanted element. Like the photo would be a discrete observation, or the reportage.

Beautiful idea, beautiful execution! tfs

Marek

P.s. I am one of the few who have read the note........ ;-P

Russia
Title: Gliding
Gliding (10)
Tezza Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 175 W: 95 N: 266] (2719)

Great

eMBeer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 266 W: 58 N: 221] (1420) [2009-09-16 5:33]

Hi Terry,

beautiful shot. Very good details and sense of motion. As of your note: I think that I prefer your choice - gives similar effect, but forces me to concentrate on the bird. No distractions around. tfs

Marek

eMBeer Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 266 W: 58 N: 221] (1420) [2009-09-16 5:30] [+]

Witaj Tomku,

nawiązując do zdjęcia Basi o którym rozmawialiśmy (nie wiem, czy przeczytałeś moja odpowiedź) muszę powiedzieć, że mimo, iż tutaj nie ma elementu odniesienia (no prawie nie ma - za chwile skonkretyzuję), na TYM zdjęciu WIDAĆ siłę tego wodospadu i można się domyslać jego wielkości. Może tutaj tym właśnie elementem jest głębia ostrości (jej brak) na drugim planie, wyraziste kolory pierwszego planu przeciwstawione rozmytym drugiego - to wymusza na odbiorcy wyobrażenie sobie czegoś bardzo wielkiego. Widać trójwymiarowość dzięki tym zabiegom.

Zdjęcie robi wrażenie, pięknie je wykadrowałeś na zbliżeniu (obejrzałem WS). No to jest własnie to! :-)

pozdrawiam

Marek