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![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 245 W: 4 N: 91]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-n-g.gif){kind=small}
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 24 W: 0 N: 22]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/s-n-s.gif){kind=small}
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 31 W: 29 N: 10]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/s-s-s.gif){kind=small}
(525) [2008-04-23 1:15] reat idea, maybe I would crop a little more from both sides, and move the ball slightly to the left...
![Silver Star Critiquer [C: 11 W: 1 N: 6]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/s-n-n.gif){kind=small}
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1724 W: 127 N: 1483]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-g-g.gif){kind=small}
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 256 W: 10 N: 120]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-s-g.gif){kind=small}
(525) [2008-04-23 1:10] I love the compo, plain and simple, or rather twisted :) I like to play with geometry.
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 85 W: 2 N: 10]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/g-n-s.gif){kind=small}
(525) [2008-04-23 1:05] Ah, great compo and colours. Picture is falling to the right - it's the only problem :) Maybe I would crop a little from the bottom.
(525) [2008-04-23 1:01] Beautiful - I didn't know, that winter can be actually warm :) It looks like a summer afternoon :)
![Silver Note Writer [C: 5 W: 0 N: 21]](http://i1.treklens.com/misc/n-n-s.gif){kind=small}
(525) [2008-04-23 1:00] Centralny kadr tu nie pasuje, kaczka jest malo ostra, jasny placek w prawym gornym rogu przeszkadza, nieostrosci sa za malo nieostre i rozpraszaja a kolorystyka jest jakas taka szarawa, za malo nasycona wedlug mnie.
Central composition doesn't help, duck isn't sharp enough, space behind DOF is too sharp and distracting, bright space in upper-right corner is distracting and picture is undersaturated.
Great model :), great compo, great smile.