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geist_21 Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 16 W: 1 N: 10] (124) [2009-01-31 1:44]

I like your photo, very nice composition, and I guess it was not easy to work with the bright colours of the background as opposed to the fainted colours of the spider. Nice job!

geist_21 Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 16 W: 1 N: 10] (124) [2009-01-31 1:42]

I like very much this portrait, the close up works perfectly well, and you used well the lights and shadows, and her big eyes with the shinning reflexes makes her expression quite special

geist_21 Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 16 W: 1 N: 10] (124) [2008-10-23 20:48]

I like very much the POV and colours of this photo, but I would rather see more sharpness in the line (horizontal) of cars, since the only focused line is the second.

On my view, and this is just an opinion, you may have focused on the first row (first plan, occupying more of the photo) and have blurred the rest, or, second option, keep the focus on the second line but give more focus for example for the third and fourth

geist_21 Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 16 W: 1 N: 10] (124) [2008-10-23 20:45]

I find this one a very goo attempt, but perhaps you could shot them a bit after of them coming out of the water. Like this, the water is taking too much of the photo and showing too little of the guys.

geist_21 Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 16 W: 1 N: 10] (124) [2008-10-23 20:43] [+]

I always go for the trial & error method, being one the reasons that since photo is a hobby, and an expensive one, I always have to find more tiresome alternatives to make the same effects. And indded it is much more rewarding when you manage to!

About this photo, I was wondering what was the basis of the drop, your note explains, and also explains why the slight rainbow colours (you can actually see them).

It is a nice shot, but I don't like very much what seems to be scratches on the CD (for example, on the top right), as they seem pretty distracting and make the image not so clean.

But even so, congrats for the effort!

geist_21 Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 16 W: 1 N: 10] (124) [2007-08-06 20:57]

Interesting double exposition, I guess you did it because of the glass and not with the camera, right?

Also, it is interesting the contrast between the lit interior lamps and the lamp outside off.

geist_21 Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 16 W: 1 N: 10] (124) [2007-08-06 20:56]

Um bom conceito, e interessante os detalhes das nervuras da folha. No entanto, eu focaria na nervura principal, pois esta esta desfocada, o que distrai um pouco a imagem. Por isso so dou um ponto

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HIMself Gold Star Critiquer [C: 375 W: 6 N: 9] (3574)

Great

geist_21 Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 16 W: 1 N: 10] (124) [2006-08-24 3:47]

Great photo this one, it is quite risky to make as your focal point the ground right in front of you instead of the girl, but it works perfectly here, and even more with the choice of B&W. My only hesitation is perhaps in relation to the tree, it makes a strange distracting effect, but in the overall the photo is very good

geist_21 Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 16 W: 1 N: 10] (124) [2006-08-24 3:43] [+]

Great photo you managed here, the motion is as it should be and the background is the still element where we can concentrate our view. And the most achieved element is exactly the background, colourful, and interesting, like looking over the people rushing.

geist_21 Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 16 W: 1 N: 10] (124) [2006-08-24 3:39]

Very simple compo, but very efficient, specially with the contrast between the colourful wood in the foreground and the totally grey background, which allows us to concentrate the view on the subject.