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gnangarra Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 108 W: 12 N: 1] (36) [2008-11-06 0:39]

Welcome to trek

Wonderful image I like the choice of subject the water droplets add to composition

Well done

TFS(thanks for sharing)

gnangarra Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 108 W: 12 N: 1] (36) [2008-11-06 0:36]

crunch or ouch, right on the oppositions bench has me waiting in anticipation for the next image of the bench clammering over the wall to get him

Little bit of cropping on the sides an you'd expect this as the image in tomorrows paper

TFS
Gn

gnangarra Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 108 W: 12 N: 1] (36) [2008-11-06 0:29]

Nice composition, positioning and choice of images is good, I would suggest feathering/blurring the edges around the person.

gnangarra Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 108 W: 12 N: 1] (36) [2008-11-06 0:25]

definitely abstract, the horizontal composition adds to the feeling

TFS
Gn

gnangarra Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 108 W: 12 N: 1] (36) [2008-11-02 18:04] [+]

interesting composition, I would have goven more spcae to the girl in the bottom right. Also one problem is the way didgital cameras handles the range of light, the clouds in this are are over expose and draw the eye away from the subject, my thought would be to crop the clouds out before resizing the image

TFS
Gn.

gnangarra Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 108 W: 12 N: 1] (36) [2008-11-02 17:52]

Nice framing, the sealion is a little lost in the back ground but not a big problem. IMHO the flippers needed more space

gnangarra Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 108 W: 12 N: 1] (36) [2008-11-02 17:48]

interesting composition, oh so many possibilitites. I'd think going to B&W rather than the current colouring. Also you could play with the graffiti and colour "The Spot" with a bright red or something

TFS
GN.

Malaysia
Title: moon
moon (4)
qiau (221)

Great

gnangarra Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 108 W: 12 N: 1] (36) [2008-11-02 17:45] [+]

awesome image, two thing that would improve the wow factor, one is moving the moon off centre and the other is the horizon is tilted.

Also it'd be nice if the description included what editing was done

TFS
GN.

gnangarra Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 108 W: 12 N: 1] (36) [2008-10-23 21:07] [+]

A beautiful tribute, its a shame that such losses help to create such beauty.

My condolences to you, your friends family and her son may the future shine brightly with the joy of her memory

Gn.

gnangarra Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 108 W: 12 N: 1] (36) [2008-10-23 20:35]

beautiful detail, the eyes really draw you in, is that you in the reflection or me