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iGirl Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 116 W: 29 N: 112] (610) [2007-04-08 14:29] [+]

Great colors and patterns, this is so abstract! It really looks like it could be a painting! Good eye to notice this!
TFS,
Erin

iGirl Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 116 W: 29 N: 112] (610) [2007-03-31 13:50]

Nice, I like the fluffy textures. I like this one better than the farther-away shot because this one allows me to enjoy the textures and colors without so much distraction.
TFS,
Erin

iGirl Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 116 W: 29 N: 112] (610) [2007-03-24 13:42]

What a cute shot! I love the little guy's face, and how you have used DOF to emphasize that. I like the composition and am not bothered at all by the cropped-out horn. Your cropping looks very purposeful to me.
TFS,
Erin

iGirl Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 116 W: 29 N: 112] (610) [2007-03-24 13:39] - [workshop] [compare]

Buna Monica, I like this perspective on the aging architecture. The textures and colors are very interesting, and I like the slope of the street going downhill. My only suggestion would be to crop a bit from the top, because the window of the other house distracts my eye. I did a workshop to show you this idea, and also to see what it would look like in b&w.
TFS,
Erin

iGirl Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 116 W: 29 N: 112] (610) [2007-03-24 13:27]

Hi Saman, this is a nice panorama, I like the dramatic lighting. I enjoyed this especially because I have recently become interested in panoramas. I think the lighting is really what makes this shot interesting. The only change I would make would be to clone out the power poles, which I see someone has already done in the workshop.
TFS,
Erin

iGirl Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 116 W: 29 N: 112] (610) [2007-03-24 11:42]

Beautiful portrait, I love the expressions on their faces and the reflections in their eyes.

I prefer the color version, probably because of the orange hat. Also I think I would prefer a little less noise removal.

TFS,

Erin

iGirl Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 116 W: 29 N: 112] (610) [2007-03-21 15:47]

Nice colors, well-composed. The girl is positioned so perfectly, it looks like she was posed, but her pose is also so natural that it looks like maybe she was not posed. Looking at this picture I can hear the quiet of the evening, and I almost feel a slight breeze blowing through my hair.
TFS,
Erin

iGirl Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 116 W: 29 N: 112] (610) [2007-03-21 15:44]

Nice mood, I love the radical cropping! Great DOF, nice textures on the face caused by the lighting, good control of the b&w tones. I can't think of any way to make this better!
TFS,
Erin

iGirl Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 116 W: 29 N: 112] (610) [2007-03-21 14:38] [+]

Hi, nice closeup, interesting with the cybershot logo. The focus is slightly off, though. It is focusing on the grasshopper's legs and I wish it were focused on the grasshopper's head. Still nice, though.
TFS,
Erin

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cezar62 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1094 W: 126 N: 594] (8091)

Great

iGirl Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 116 W: 29 N: 112] (610) [2007-03-13 15:18]

Hi Cezar, I just discovered this lovely shot and I want to say, well done! You have captured the light masterfully. When I try shots like this, I end up with ugly glares. I don't know how you did this, but it is beautifu1!
TFS!
Erin