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jatintalwar (99) [2008-12-16 18:57]

Suha
Very well composed and excellent HDR like feel .
Liked it a lot
Suggestion :
Keeping the tree to slightly right side of the frame .
Avoiding that burnt out area in the sky .
If this was an HDR , then u can try slightly different settings exposure while mergining the shots .....
Thanks for sharing
Jatin

jatintalwar (99) [2008-12-11 6:12]

Excellent shot and adequately processed ,
I think u have used a layer mask if not an HDR ? but the treatment done is adequate ......
The sharpness is excellent across the whole frame ...
Sunrays emerging through the clouds are giving a different drama to the frame .
Thanks for sharing

jatintalwar (99) [2008-12-04 19:04]

Beautiful red color against a blue sky..wonderfully done indeed and yes its a great place to shoot
I wud give a small suggestion though .....Would it have been better to shoot with a wider angle ?? including some more of the boat . The gear might have been a limitation i believe .....

Thanks for sharing
Jatin

Brazil
Title: Sunset
Sunset (4)
atpaula (196)

Great

jatintalwar (99) [2008-11-27 19:11] [+]

Paula
Excellent capture .
The cloud pattern has been reproduced beautifullly with ur wide angle. That red flag adds a different charm to the overall frame ,
Few suggestions though :
I wud have preferred to keep that man slightly to the right and some more space on the left where he was looking
May be a bit of underexposure wud have reproduced the sun and its reflection in the water in a better way ,
Thanks for sharing
Keep up the good work
Jatin

jatintalwar (99) [2008-11-26 19:14]

Jeff
Thats a nice attempt BUt ....few observations
THe X ray has been put the other way round .( plz see the nos that are in reverse !!!!)
The whites have been almost blown out in the region of the cervical region and the clavicle bone . Even the occipital region of the skull is burnt out . ( all above in the far right radiograph)
I just wish u wud have kept the exposure slightly on the lower side to avoid this problem
Nonethless , a nice try

Jatin

jatintalwar (99) [2008-11-25 4:20] [+]

Beautiful dramatic sky with nice silhoutted "friends "
Compositonally everything falls at the right place ...
Thanks for sharing
Jatin

jatintalwar (99) [2008-11-24 7:29]

Rajasekar
Well composed and a nice mood created in the picture by inclusion of that lonely bench ....
Liked it
Thanks for sharing
Jatin

jatintalwar (99) [2008-11-23 19:14]

JUmat
I can make out that this picture has involoved a heavy post processing . Doesnt look to be the original photograph that u must have captured from ur camera .
THe still water never gives wavy reflections !!! and we dont see the light halos so far from the setting sun .....u need to get all these things right .....
But all in all i like the overall effect its giving .....
Thanks for sharing
Jatin

jatintalwar (99) [2008-11-18 4:46] [+]

Interesting shades of blue Hussein ....The saturation has come out very well ......
Thanks for sharing
Jatin

jatintalwar (99) [2008-11-18 4:40]

Beautiful reflections captured .....Very well composed ....
THose Nihangs in blue and orange provide a nice contrast to the image ,
Thanks for sharing
Jatin