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jespertorjas Silver Note Writer [C: 5 W: 3 N: 10] (78) [2007-12-20 12:41]

Very artistic. Excellent composition and photographic work.

Turkey
Title: mask
mask (99) *
eliferen Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 573 W: 84 N: 426] (3644)

Great

jespertorjas Silver Note Writer [C: 5 W: 3 N: 10] (78) [2007-12-16 22:58]

Lovely. Sensous and inventive.

jespertorjas Silver Note Writer [C: 5 W: 3 N: 10] (78) [2006-08-23 16:37] [comment] [+]

Patterns made by nature, or man for that matter (farmers, snowplowers, carpenters etc.) are always fascinating. They might not be intended as a piece of art but they just end up that way.
I don't know if your choice of category was a deliberate one, but it makes me wonder what you did decide ;). I'm just curious since the picture gives me the feeling of one of those cosmic days when everything seems to fall in place and make sense.

Brazil
Title: monks
monks (17) *
Isabelle Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 180 W: 51 N: 89] (1126)

Great

jespertorjas Silver Note Writer [C: 5 W: 3 N: 10] (78) [2004-06-06 13:27] [+]

I didn't quite catch what the "RPG International Event" is all about.
At first I thought you were fed up with your soft, sensuous (only positive) way of capturing people and decided to go gothic.
The series of photos are interesting and you have shared a lot of interesting pp notes.
They are a bright contrast to your photos in terms of patience and declare a "punk/party" attitude that you have emphasizes in your pp work.
Congrats to your co work.

jespertorjas Silver Note Writer [C: 5 W: 3 N: 10] (78) [2004-05-27 14:05]

It brings back memories of childhood. Very colourful memories.

Israel
Title: Adi
Adi (20)
guyben Silver Note Writer [C: 0 W: 0 N: 12] (313)

Great

jespertorjas Silver Note Writer [C: 5 W: 3 N: 10] (78) [2004-05-27 11:18]

Another lovely portrait.
Your a master of creating intimacy with your facial closeups.
I've aired my opinion on Neat Image and skin on your "Peaceful tension" but here you have more made a decision to make it artificial which I prefer. There's just a tiny bit of reality left on her lip.
But I would love to see it without NI.

jespertorjas Silver Note Writer [C: 5 W: 3 N: 10] (78) [2004-05-27 11:08]

Lovely composition and light. You have created a great sense of intimacy.
My only negative comment is (which has been mentioned earlier)that I'm not a fan of what Neat Image does to skin. It makes it furry or plastic or at least very artificial. It's especially noticeable on her cheek.
Altogethet it's lovely and amacing, but I have this crusade about Neat Image and skin at the moment.

jespertorjas Silver Note Writer [C: 5 W: 3 N: 10] (78) [2004-05-26 4:42] - [workshop] [compare]

Wonderful composition and colours.
The artifacts are irritating. I tried improving the background in WS.

jespertorjas Silver Note Writer [C: 5 W: 3 N: 10] (78) [2004-05-26 3:40] [+]

I love this portrait. Especially the hair but also the drifting eyes.
Neat Image has been a good companion many times but I'm not sure I like what it does to skin, it becomes a bit too soft.

jespertorjas Silver Note Writer [C: 5 W: 3 N: 10] (78) [2004-05-25 16:46]

Another fabulous portrait. Excellent interpretation of the mentioned theme.

...and the age issue goes on and on :-D. I promise I will never mention it.