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jonathanhart Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1771 W: 295 N: 1496] (15789) [2009-11-08 13:01]

simple, efficient, great lighting, well seen
jc

jonathanhart Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1771 W: 295 N: 1496] (15789) [2009-11-08 8:59]

excellente série
créatif, suggestif,
il n'y a que la quatrième que je trouve moins réussie
jc

jonathanhart Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1771 W: 295 N: 1496] (15789) [2009-11-04 3:32] [+]

wow, four honest critiques, TL is back on the good way !
a agree about the oversharpening
beautiful POV and colors
jc

jonathanhart Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1771 W: 295 N: 1496] (15789) [2009-11-04 3:30]

interesting triptych
each one is nice, but i prefer the pink one
the technique is fine, of course
and the choice to put the pink between the green and the blue ones is very fine
jc

jonathanhart Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1771 W: 295 N: 1496] (15789) [2009-11-04 3:25] [+]

cute place, framed in the rules
the colors are attractive (even if the green look strange on my screen)
jc

jonathanhart Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1771 W: 295 N: 1496] (15789) [2009-11-03 19:26] [comment]

make up for a diver ? haha ^^
i would add some gamma and make it less saturated

jonathanhart Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1771 W: 295 N: 1496] (15789) [2009-11-03 19:17]

about composition, your previous posts are far better
the choice of the place? or maybe you could try very low POV...
about the lighting, the shot has no added value with that backlight , which is more disturbing than beneficial
indeed, this place don't look being in the heart of a metropolis, by the way : nice fall series ☺
jc

jonathanhart Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1771 W: 295 N: 1496] (15789) [2009-11-03 19:04]

simply a great bokeh
the exposure is fine and the composition is original
less elements than with the previous post (even if each element is nice), better to focus on the essential
jc

jonathanhart Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1771 W: 295 N: 1496] (15789) [2009-11-03 2:47] [+]

your heavy B&W processing is interesting, it could be on a wall, even if it looks very busy (in fact, i bet it's the intention, a busy photo, like a busy city)
jc

jonathanhart Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1771 W: 295 N: 1496] (15789) [2009-11-03 2:45] [+]

no photographers note to know if the following is appropriate :
two suggestions
*add some more saturation (if you like it of course)
and/or
*straighten the vertical lines with a software (generally building photos are better straight)
*if you don't like both of the suggestion, i would just crop out the tiny area of sky in the upper right corner
jc