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Title: Quack
Quack (18)
ninadev Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 122 W: 14 N: 115] (1043)

Great

joso Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 18 W: 1 N: 21] (136) [2004-04-24 3:40]

As simple, so good, Nina.
The subtile geometry of the twigs, their position on the upwards in colour degrading background works very well.
The eye - lovely addition, but IMO not necessary.
Very good framing, matching the colours.

joso Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 18 W: 1 N: 21] (136) [2004-04-24 3:31]

Good contrast, perspective, texture, well framed.
The reflections of the clouds on the severe construction are a good addition.

joso Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 18 W: 1 N: 21] (136) [2004-04-24 3:24] [2]

Three colours, one team -I like the symbolic in it.
I'd like it even more if the third one would be in the same level.
However. well seen and done, Bruno.

joso Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 18 W: 1 N: 21] (136) [2004-04-24 3:16]

As your title says: there's everything contrasting. Colours tones, textures, styles.
Well seen and done, Ray.

joso Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 18 W: 1 N: 21] (136) [2004-04-23 10:41] [2]

Home? Where is that? On Borneo they cut almost every forest where we earlier lived... Several hundreds of acre are disappearing every weak...
Some people are trying to rescue us, getting our orfane babies to special stations. Orfans, because their mother died of starvation, or were captured, ore were shot down...
Can you tell me where my home is? Can you bring it back?

That's what I can read in his eyes, Yitzhak.
The harsh light emphasize the unnatural conditions, and the deep sitting, glooming eyes give really a sad feeling.

joso Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 18 W: 1 N: 21] (136) [2004-04-23 6:03]

Beautiful colours, light and shadow, good diagonal composition, I like how you let the road/way ballance it.

What I don't like is the "agressive" framing, I have the feeling that the beauty of the landscape and the atmosphere get lost, because of the too large frame. But this is just an opinion.
Very good note.

joso Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 18 W: 1 N: 21] (136) [2004-04-23 5:27]

Good idea, Jack, to fill the empty arena. In february looks even so empty. You visited the museum also...
I would place him less central, I think in the right corner, turned 180° - his hugeniss and power need more space IMO.

joso Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 18 W: 1 N: 21] (136) [2004-04-23 4:49]

Good colours, sharpness, composition. The way you framed it makes it almost to 3D, the waterdrops makes it even more real.
Very well done - a note about the what and how in the PP-work could be usefull for us

joso Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 18 W: 1 N: 21] (136) [2004-04-23 4:39]

Having same problems, I'd like to carry a mirror like this with me...
Good idea, I like the background you put it on, really effectfull

joso Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 18 W: 1 N: 21] (136) [2004-04-21 18:29]

Excellent, Isabelle.
Totally agree with Yitzhak, I could just repeat...
Excellent texture given by the pebbles for the background, contrasting and emphasizing.
A lot of smileys....