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jpg12155 (70) [2006-09-03 12:33]
excellent...... the contrast, the expression on the girls face.. the moment was very well captured.... very good work....
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jpg12155 (70) [2006-08-30 2:37]
an great photo... it´s very impressive, the look on the childs face says it all.... very good capture of the espression.... great work...
jpg12155 (70) [2006-08-30 2:35]
in my opinion, it works much better than the colour one... great photo.. great sky for b/w.... very good
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jpg12155 (70) [2006-08-27 23:58]
olá.. boa foto, cores suberbas, a moldura ficou muito bem, e a falta de profundidade de campo dá um aspecto espectacular neste macro..
muito bom......
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jpg12155 (70) [2006-07-14 9:27] [comment]
hi.. good photo. try to put some contrast on it, you´ve got too much white space and the black colour ins´t strong enough... try to get less greys. good moment..
hi... and welcome to treklens...... this is great photo, great moment.. but you need to explore the editing of your photos.... it seems i´m not the only one to have done an workshop on this photo... but any way, take a look at the worshops because they will give you ideas and ways to improve your photos..... i hope to see much more photos... keep up....
Joao.