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jramos Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 1 N: 77] (389) [2009-10-28 20:22]

very nice composition and great colors.

jramos Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 1 N: 77] (389) [2009-01-24 18:57]

I like the scene you've captured with the trees and the mountains, as well as, the golden light that bathes your photo. I think the best part, though, is the person in the middle of it all -- this makes it a special photo. nice job!

p.s. the only thing is the distracting frame. it is unnecessary.

jramos Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 1 N: 77] (389) [2008-05-28 19:10]

This is a fantastic photograph of such an iconic Puerto Rican structure. Perfect.

jramos Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 1 N: 77] (389) [2008-05-28 19:07]

Those are the "Organ Mountains" on the eastern part of Las Cruces, New Mexico. Nice photo.

jramos Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 1 N: 77] (389) [2007-08-18 18:51] [+]

i like this kind of sky. Looks very much like the Albuquerque skies during the late summer and fall season. nice capture.

jramos Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 1 N: 77] (389) [2007-08-18 12:00] - [workshop] [compare]

I like the composition and the pose, but not the cropped head. Also, I thought that the color was a bit distracting and so decided to include a workshop.

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opti Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 19 W: 6 N: 21] (537)

Great

jramos Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 1 N: 77] (389) [2007-02-01 22:50]

This is pretty scary and yet I can't completely make out what her eyes and mouth are trying to say. She seems sad or worried and disturbed (possibly by the viewer). Anyway, bon travail.

jramos Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 1 N: 77] (389) [2006-11-21 23:13] [+]

I like the overall effect. looks like a bronze statue. The hands are amazingly winkled and nuisanced -- the finger print detail is especially interesting. nice work both of you.

jramos Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 1 N: 77] (389) [2006-11-21 23:05]

I like the bold blue and green colors as well as the parrots outside of the frame. I'm not sure about the glow tho, especially on her left elbow.

jramos Silver Note Writer [C: 6 W: 1 N: 77] (389) [2006-11-18 16:10] [comment]

I love the dark sky, as well as, the contrast in textures of the lighter objects (the smooth statue and the grainy adobe church fascade). This is a wonderful effect I hope to emulate. Thank you for the idea.