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jyraya Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 32 W: 2 N: 11] (153) [2006-11-26 0:11]

It lookks like a shot taken by the french when they first rediscovered the Ankor.
brilliant.

jyraya Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 32 W: 2 N: 11] (153) [2006-09-14 7:48]

the tight crop here is excellent. I think the photo would have lost something if it wasnt such a tight shot.
nice image. the play of the shadows of the thorns on the bulb are excellent.
beautiful.

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iso Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1119 W: 62 N: 167] (27939)

Great

jyraya Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 32 W: 2 N: 11] (153) [2006-09-14 7:43] [+]

wonderful composition. A nice little splash of colour on a dull grey sectioned wall. well done.
beautiful stuff.

jyraya Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 32 W: 2 N: 11] (153) [2006-09-05 3:14] [+]

Hello Michel
Wonderful Blues.
I cant believe the tones and shades of blue in this photo. i like the composition very much as well.
I think in a few days i will start posting again. I have a few shots that i have taken while trying to emulate your style.
Once again beautiful.

jyraya Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 32 W: 2 N: 11] (153) [2006-09-04 4:27]

Hi Loon
Great concept and a nice photo.
Although to me it seems slightly out of focus. PErhaps thats just my monitor though.
well done

jyraya Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 32 W: 2 N: 11] (153) [2006-09-03 3:07] [+]

Hi Michel
I have been away for a while but you still never cease to amaze me.
The warm homey feeling of the sunlight comming through the blinds. makes me miss home.

jyraya Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 32 W: 2 N: 11] (153) [2006-09-03 2:49]

The Chamber of death.
I too was moved by this place when i first saw it.
Although i decided that taking a photo of it would be somehow wrong. you have done a nice job capturing the mood of this horrible place though. well done.

jyraya Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 32 W: 2 N: 11] (153) [2006-08-29 6:38]

Hi Darwin
with the right model this cold be a fantastic shot.
the beautiful (although a little dark) sepia tones woudl work very well if there were some beautiful flowing clothes on a model standing on the rock.
Linen and gauze work very well in the wind, as does silk.
any way. its a good shot that could be great.
keep it up.

jyraya Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 32 W: 2 N: 11] (153) [2006-08-29 6:33]

Hi Mirella
I like this photo a lot. Like ashi says the Point of View is excellent and the colours are stunning, such wonderful contrast between the orange of the robes and the green and grey of the background.
However what ashi says about the noise is also true.
You could use "neatimage" to fix this problem. It does a pretty good job. Its also a free download for the basic version.
The loss in sharpness is inevidable when using these programmes. But most of the loss of sharpness issues can be corrected by using a photoshop program.
anyway. nice shot. i hope get to see more of your shots.

jyraya Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 32 W: 2 N: 11] (153) [2006-07-19 5:18]

Beautiful Photo Loon
the detail of the wings that is still visible on the water is great.
wonderful job.
:)