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marcocig Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 479 W: 53 N: 70] (3502) [2009-12-10 4:10]

Great intuition to catch the cello's shape so far in such a huge structure, it creates an excellent effect.
His expression is a bit bored, a pity, but what could you do for that?? ;)

Marco

marcocig Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 479 W: 53 N: 70] (3502) [2009-12-10 2:14] [+]

That's a really great and original interpretation of a portrait (less the self p). I love the lighting and especially his expression, which really made y shot a step up.
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marcocig Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 479 W: 53 N: 70] (3502) [2009-12-09 9:00]

simple and effective compo, the colours palette is super, maybe the sharpness is a bit underperformed.

M

marcocig Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 479 W: 53 N: 70] (3502) [2009-11-30 9:31]

Superbe overall effect, fog is always a great card to play... ;)

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marcocig Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 479 W: 53 N: 70] (3502) [2009-11-22 3:21] [+]

Very interesting composition, according to my taste I would have enhance the darker tones, but just me.

M

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marcocig Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 479 W: 53 N: 70] (3502) [2009-11-08 7:47]

excellent artwork, I really appreciate y technique and fantasy.

M

marcocig Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 479 W: 53 N: 70] (3502) [2009-11-07 7:27] [comment]

Sei troppo fuori ;) Mi piego dalle risate...

ciao

Marco

marcocig Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 479 W: 53 N: 70] (3502) [2009-11-04 1:30]

Hi Ben,

I really love the colours you caught, and the rose is lovely.
Personally I would have choosed a slightly different compo:
I would have keep much less of the metal rib, shifting the POV to the right to keep on the BG the coloured out of focus yellow branches which are now visible on the left side.

M

marcocig Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 479 W: 53 N: 70] (3502) [2009-11-02 1:21] [+]

Hi Arman,

this shot has a huge potential, and the effect is really powerfull. I love the light on the wooden fence on the right side and the depth along the "corridor" with the environment revealed by some element like the water. I love the boy looking at the camera together with the figure composed by both of them (boy and dog). Somebody wrote that you've been lucky with the boy looking at the camera, I find instead you've been a bit unlucky with the position of them respect to the whole compo.
Unfortunately the boy's eye is in a "shadow zone" created by the composition and light (especially the OE on the dog's back).
A possible solution could have been to crop the upper side of the shot, putting the boy's head in a better position for our eyes, to be more confortable to find it, but IMO you would have spoiled the shot cause the upper purt it is an important element for the meaning of the shot itself.
So, the best would have been to make a PP on the dog removing away the brightness.

congrats

Marco

marcocig Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 479 W: 53 N: 70] (3502) [2009-10-24 12:00]

Nice capture, I like the colours and the POC choosen