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simple and effective compo, the colours palette is super, maybe the sharpness is a bit underperformed.
M
Superbe overall effect, fog is always a great card to play... ;)
M
Hi Ben,
I really love the colours you caught, and the rose is lovely.
Personally I would have choosed a slightly different compo:
I would have keep much less of the metal rib, shifting the POV to the right to keep on the BG the coloured out of focus yellow branches which are now visible on the left side.
M
Hi Arman,
this shot has a huge potential, and the effect is really powerfull. I love the light on the wooden fence on the right side and the depth along the "corridor" with the environment revealed by some element like the water. I love the boy looking at the camera together with the figure composed by both of them (boy and dog). Somebody wrote that you've been lucky with the boy looking at the camera, I find instead you've been a bit unlucky with the position of them respect to the whole compo.
Unfortunately the boy's eye is in a "shadow zone" created by the composition and light (especially the OE on the dog's back).
A possible solution could have been to crop the upper side of the shot, putting the boy's head in a better position for our eyes, to be more confortable to find it, but IMO you would have spoiled the shot cause the upper purt it is an important element for the meaning of the shot itself.
So, the best would have been to make a PP on the dog removing away the brightness.
congrats
Marco

Great intuition to catch the cello's shape so far in such a huge structure, it creates an excellent effect.
His expression is a bit bored, a pity, but what could you do for that?? ;)
Marco