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this is my kinda composition and my kinda shot!!
i would definitely have gone monochrome with it, but look good in color too.
the lady's beautiful and has posed wonderfully. her's is the kind of beauty i admire :)
let me offer you a workshop, hoping you will like it.
muhammad muhsin
hello david :)
i used to take photos in dubai with the same spirit as you do.
i agree with rew on sharpening, though i love the cinematic black frame, giving it a movie like look. your image is a bit too saturated for my liking, but it still works, i love the fact that you took the shot at the right moment when the clouds were low.
i dont think it would have packed so much appeal without the clouds.
muhammad muhsin
hi :)
wonderful composition! i love the LOOK of your photo :)
clearly, this is one of the most eye-pleasing compositions ever!
muhammad muhsin
salam alekum mr abid :)
i think this photo is one of your best photos in a long time, and most likely the best photo in your treklens gallery.
looking at this photo, i can only appreciate the GOLD RING lens.. i mean you can see the look it has created and the details are TOP NOTCH...
her pose is great! i love the warm tone of the light.. you should print it big and frame it right :)
muhammad muhsin
hello david.
i think that the grain from iso1250 added to the mood. great makeup and a very intelligent lighting idea..
due to my extremely poor post processing skills, i can only dream of creating the eye effect there!
muhammad muhsin
very good colors and good use of wide frame.
i liked your note too.
muhammad muhsin
welcome to treklens :)
this is a beautiful black and white :) looks like its a still from a steven speilberg movie :)
muhammad muhsin
i like this one more than the other one u have recently posted.
there is good clarity, good colors and i love the silhouetting bird in the BG :)
muhammad muhsin
yar jahanzeb honestly speaking, one really has to strain the eyes to spot the peacock in the picture, and thats what i think is the weak point. your title says peacock and the well. the well is well demonstrated but the peacock gets merged or lost with/in the backgound..
perhaps black and white was not a good choice for this one, keeping the peacock in mind.
muhammad muhsin

i love the LOOK of this image. but i am sad that the hat is cut off at the top...
muhammad muhsin