Members: mark25 >> Critiques Written

Register

Critiques: Critiques Written | Critiques Received | Comments
Page: 1 2 3 4 5  >

PhotoCritique [Translate]

mark25 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 359 W: 9 N: 742] (4599) [2009-11-21 8:01]

i love the LOOK of this image. but i am sad that the hat is cut off at the top...

muhammad muhsin

mark25 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 359 W: 9 N: 742] (4599) [2009-11-08 21:23] - [workshop] [compare] [+]

this is my kinda composition and my kinda shot!!

i would definitely have gone monochrome with it, but look good in color too.

the lady's beautiful and has posed wonderfully. her's is the kind of beauty i admire :)

let me offer you a workshop, hoping you will like it.


muhammad muhsin

mark25 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 359 W: 9 N: 742] (4599) [2009-11-08 21:21]

hello david :)

i used to take photos in dubai with the same spirit as you do.

i agree with rew on sharpening, though i love the cinematic black frame, giving it a movie like look. your image is a bit too saturated for my liking, but it still works, i love the fact that you took the shot at the right moment when the clouds were low.

i dont think it would have packed so much appeal without the clouds.

muhammad muhsin

mark25 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 359 W: 9 N: 742] (4599) [2009-11-06 9:39]

hi :)

wonderful composition! i love the LOOK of your photo :)

clearly, this is one of the most eye-pleasing compositions ever!

muhammad muhsin

Pakistan
Title: Rubab
Rubab (10)
athlon Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 105 W: 6 N: 80] (1326)

Great

mark25 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 359 W: 9 N: 742] (4599) [2009-11-06 9:29]

salam alekum mr abid :)

i think this photo is one of your best photos in a long time, and most likely the best photo in your treklens gallery.

looking at this photo, i can only appreciate the GOLD RING lens.. i mean you can see the look it has created and the details are TOP NOTCH...

her pose is great! i love the warm tone of the light.. you should print it big and frame it right :)

muhammad muhsin

mark25 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 359 W: 9 N: 742] (4599) [2009-11-04 5:19]

hello david.

i think that the grain from iso1250 added to the mood. great makeup and a very intelligent lighting idea..

due to my extremely poor post processing skills, i can only dream of creating the eye effect there!

muhammad muhsin

mark25 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 359 W: 9 N: 742] (4599) [2009-11-01 20:18]

very good colors and good use of wide frame.

i liked your note too.

muhammad muhsin

mark25 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 359 W: 9 N: 742] (4599) [2009-11-01 3:27]

welcome to treklens :)

this is a beautiful black and white :) looks like its a still from a steven speilberg movie :)

muhammad muhsin

mark25 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 359 W: 9 N: 742] (4599) [2009-10-30 19:55]

i like this one more than the other one u have recently posted.

there is good clarity, good colors and i love the silhouetting bird in the BG :)

muhammad muhsin

mark25 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 359 W: 9 N: 742] (4599) [2009-10-30 19:54] [+]

yar jahanzeb honestly speaking, one really has to strain the eyes to spot the peacock in the picture, and thats what i think is the weak point. your title says peacock and the well. the well is well demonstrated but the peacock gets merged or lost with/in the backgound..

perhaps black and white was not a good choice for this one, keeping the peacock in mind.

muhammad muhsin