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(89) [2008-09-05 13:57] Salam Farish jon;
Good idea, very nice choice of B/W, good composition and great spot lighting on that part of the hand. I think you should try this shot with less perspective distortion so the hand of the child is small and fragile like the flower!!! Just an idea, great job.
TsF
ramin
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(89) [2008-09-02 13:30] Salam Saeed;
Wow, an amazing silhouette, sunset, composition, timing, angle, clarity, colors, water dance...did I cover it all, oh yes Great Image.
TsF
ramin
(89) [2008-08-31 14:37] Hello Joerg,
Beautiful picture, great capture of the moment, awsome framing of the subject...Really good job with anticipation of this shot.
TsF
ramin
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(89) [2008-08-31 14:34] Hi Jeremy;
Great shot, great composition, great dance of sunset colors... Excellent capture of highlights and shadows. Thank you for letting us see this picture, I've always said; you have to be fortunate person to see Hawaii and we are fortunate that you were able to capture this beautiful scene for us...
TsF
ramin
(89) [2008-08-31 14:25] Hello Antonios;
Beautiful shot, well framed, well croped, great look on your subjects, good skin tones...and great choice with B/W. If you were trying to convey their moment you succeeded...
TsF
ramin
(89) [2008-08-31 14:16] Salam Maryam;
Good picture, I like the B/W, great highlights and shadows. Try rotating the picture to see if you get a stronger composition. Overall good capture of an interesting scene and light.
(89) [2008-08-31 14:08] Salam Saeed;
Great job, what a wonderful composition, I like the way you have edited this picture as far as the color. Great use of the kid in your foreground and the other person on the rocks, thanks for capturing this moment...
TsF
ramin
(89) [2008-08-31 14:04] Farish jon;
Wow, good job with the light play! Interesting abstract, I like it...good job
TsF
ramin
Hi Karele;
Nice form, I like the composition and colors. I would have like to see the subjcet in complete focus from bottom to top due to the great closeup...
Good picture, TsF
ramin