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mbasil Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 250 W: 150 N: 409] (2860) [2009-11-11 14:45]

Wow. Well done, Brian. I probably would have done a long exposure of the sky, walked into the shot and fired a flash at myself, and walked out and closed the shutter. Your is better an more real, and definitely took more patience.
Mike

mbasil Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 250 W: 150 N: 409] (2860) [2009-09-30 17:25]

Nice use of that Sigma, Niek. As usual this is a great landscape and the lens helps pack in so much detail that the shot is rich. But what I really like about your composition is the use of fg, mg, and bg elements to really draw the viewers' eye into the scene toward the mountain. I might have tried to place that fg grass a bit further to the left to balance the mountain on the right, but there might have been some stuff in the way.
Mike

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isa Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 356 W: 57 N: 710] (4145)

Great

mbasil Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 250 W: 150 N: 409] (2860) [2009-09-14 19:49]

Very crisp details here Isabel. That really makes this image "snap" for me, and turn this from ordinary to great.
Mike

mbasil Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 250 W: 150 N: 409] (2860) [2009-07-24 20:25]

Nice detail shot, Sunil. Great subject. I like the off-center composition that makes for some informal balance between the door and the flowers. My only suggestion is that if feels just a bit "crowded" -- is there any way to get a little more space in the frame.
Mike

mbasil Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 250 W: 150 N: 409] (2860) [2009-07-24 14:01]

Nice architectural shot, Jolanta. Nice formal balanced composition. You weren't using a very small aperature, but there seems to be suffient DoF here. Well done.
Mike

mbasil Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 250 W: 150 N: 409] (2860) [2009-07-24 13:59]

Perfect, Atha. The story of the sunflower against the sky works wonderfully as a subject and a story.Perfect day for the shot, too, because the wonderful wispy clouds are great. Technically, this is a great job controlling the light and great use of depth-of-field, too.
Mike

mbasil Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 250 W: 150 N: 409] (2860) [2009-06-27 2:58]

Nicely seen and captured. The limited and coordinanted color palatte is the driving force between the shot. But the details are just off-center and incomplete enough to make the image compelling. Nicely done.
Mike

mbasil Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 250 W: 150 N: 409] (2860) [2009-06-27 2:17]

Perfect studio shot. Nice subject here, well composed and nice water details. The black background really makes the shot, though. Well done!
Mike

mbasil Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 250 W: 150 N: 409] (2860) [2009-06-27 2:16]

Wonderful landscape, Alireza. Well composed. Great job on the exposure, too, to leave the details in the clouds. A winner.
Mike

mbasil Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 250 W: 150 N: 409] (2860) [2009-06-27 2:12]

Well done, Rew. All the technical details are spot on. But I think the pose really let her relax, and provides the feeling for this shot. Well done!
Mike