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melik
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(1538) [2009-10-30 1:50]
(1538) [2009-10-30 1:50] Hi Aloha,
Very dramatic effect. To get the attention to the person you can crop the picture a little bit.
greetings
omer
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melik
(1538) [2009-10-30 1:41]
(1538) [2009-10-30 1:41] Hi David,
It has a great potential. But the concret block is the disturbing the whole scanery.
Greeting,
Ömer
melik
(1538) [2009-10-30 1:38]
(1538) [2009-10-30 1:38] Merhaba Huseyin,
Guzel bir calisma olabilirdi ama yuzdeki cukurlar kontrast artirimdan dolayi dogal olmayan derin bir hal almis.
saygilar
omer
melik
(1538) [2009-09-18 4:08]
(1538) [2009-09-18 4:08] Bence bu fotografin adi yanlizlik olmamali. Yalniz olsaniz bile bu guzellik size eslik eder ve yalniz kalmaktan kurtulursunuz.
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Flavia,
I like it. Its showing the innocent sweetness of a child.
gretings
omer