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moketni Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 562 W: 64 N: 315] (1485) [2008-12-09 4:44] [comment]

Hello Hayati

absolutley fantastic, what a wonderful composition, the trees against the back drop of the mountains adds such drama and intrigue to the image, it is beautiful.

I am impressed, well done.

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moketni Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 562 W: 64 N: 315] (1485) [2008-12-09 4:41] [comment]

WOW! Hayati I have no words...!

moketni Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 562 W: 64 N: 315] (1485) [2008-12-09 4:26] [comment]

This is really a great shot, I love the reflection and the contrasting textures of the water and the brush.

Nice one Gavin - Keep it up.

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moketni Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 562 W: 64 N: 315] (1485) [2008-12-08 12:06] [comment]

This is absolutley beautiful, the colours and detail are so vivid and alive - what a winter wonderland.
You have captured it perfectly, the composition the lighting and exposure are for me perfect.
Just one thing, what is that cloud (looks like smoke)under the tree on the left?

Well done, beautifully captured.

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moketni Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 562 W: 64 N: 315] (1485) [2008-12-08 5:48] - [workshop] [compare] [+]

Johan I think it is great, the composition works for me. I love the backdrop, the lighting and the models look.
Maybe a slight crop on the left, just to remove the brick wall and the fallen hurdle, and then the removal of the pole as Erik mentioned.
Otherwise well done, I like it!
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moketni Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 562 W: 64 N: 315] (1485) [2008-12-07 20:33]

Hello Ninfa, what a vibrant beautiful flower. Very rich in detail such contrast between the stamen and the petals.
I like it.

It's good to see you are still posting.

Keep it up. X
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moketni Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 562 W: 64 N: 315] (1485) [2008-12-07 20:10] [comment] [+]

A wonderful and powerful depiction of a strong and proud woman. At the moment in South Africa we are commemorating 16 days of activism, this is an initiative against the abuse of women and children, it will hopefully, instill within all, that women are strong, courageous and steadfast and should be respected and acknowleged in all facets of life.
Carla's life has history, lineage and roots, how wonderful to know deep down that you are somebody with purpose and belonging!!

An excellent image with so much meaning.

Well done Rew. Keep it up.
::M::

Canada
Title: Guêpe
Guêpe (10)
bigil Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 266 W: 38 N: 56] (2109)

Great

moketni Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 562 W: 64 N: 315] (1485) [2008-12-07 19:55] [comment]

A really wonderful composition, with striking colours and brilliant DOF.
A vibrant and dramatic images that excites the viewer.

Well done!

::M::

Canada
Title: heavy pp
heavy pp (6)
zto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 946 W: 120 N: 59] (262)

Great

moketni Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 562 W: 64 N: 315] (1485) [2008-12-07 11:32] [comment]

Wow! I once again am awe struck by your artistic abilities, this is really great - so much drama!
The colours are absolutley brilliant and add so much depth and to the overall picture.

Well done my friend and thank you.

Good to see you still posting after all these years - please don't stop.

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moketni Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 562 W: 64 N: 315] (1485) [2008-12-07 11:25] [comment] - [workshop] [compare] [+]

Looks like this guy didn't have such a good night, Yaaawn!!!
Well done Gavin, yes I also think it could have been a bit larger.
Good stuff - Keep it up.

::M::