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Title: Kiwi
Kiwi (28)
mesquens1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1222 W: 96 N: 750] (17315)

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mr_pedro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 447 W: 212 N: 372] (4644) [2009-08-29 0:42] [+]

Hi,
Nobody actually reacts to your note, which surprises me a bit. You say that it is an HDR experiment, but the image is not really appropriate to show the HDR potential.
First of all let me show you some experiments I have done: HDR1, HDR2.

So you should try and take a subject with very dark parts and very bright parts, HDR will then enable you to show both in the image.

Also what software are you using and how did you make the HDR?

Pedro

mr_pedro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 447 W: 212 N: 372] (4644) [2009-08-29 0:27]

A magnificent view. The magnitude is captured very nicely with the town on the foreground. A well composed shot.

TFS,
Pedro

mr_pedro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 447 W: 212 N: 372] (4644) [2009-08-29 0:24]

That looks very creepy indeed. Focus is spot on and it is nice and sharp.

TFS,
Pedro

mr_pedro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 447 W: 212 N: 372] (4644) [2009-08-28 12:09]

Hi,
Ziet er goed uit, mooi beeld. De flitser heb je niet nodig als de zon zo schijnt.

Pedro

mr_pedro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 447 W: 212 N: 372] (4644) [2009-08-28 12:05]

Hi, I like the idea, the B&W works good also. The contrast and detail in the hat is great. I don't like to much the way the background is totally black and also her skin doesn't look very nice with the conversion.

TFS,
Pedro

mr_pedro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 447 W: 212 N: 372] (4644) [2009-08-28 12:01]

Ola Ana,

Gosto da composição, uma imagem que podia ir assim para um guia turístico. A única coisa que distrai são as partes onde cai o sol. Aí tem luz a mais e teria sido melhor dar um pouco menos de luz.

Abraço,
Pedro

mr_pedro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 447 W: 212 N: 372] (4644) [2009-08-28 11:55]

Leuke foto met de lijnen. De pol. filter geeft een mooi effect, ik vind het lijken op de kleuren die je krijgt als je een film inscant.

TFS,
Pedro

Iran
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mr_pedro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 447 W: 212 N: 372] (4644) [2009-08-28 11:45] [comment]

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mr_pedro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 447 W: 212 N: 372] (4644) [2009-08-14 13:53]

Hi, Well done with the nice colours and composition. I was just wondering why you used such a big aperture?

tfs, Pedro

mr_pedro Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 447 W: 212 N: 372] (4644) [2009-08-14 13:51]

You are nicely showing the atmosphere of that night.
For close up shots of the moon you need big lenses. But you can actually use fast shutter speeds and small apertures since it is as bright as an object here during a sunny day.

TFS,
Pedro