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(246) [2008-05-29 22:09] Picture perfect moment! looove it! It's as if they're marching in a row! cuute!
Perfect timing and capture!
The message of a photo is more important than the way a person processes it or its quality.\
Good job here!
Cyrene
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(246) [2008-05-29 22:05] What a very classic look you have here in your photo Shimon! I like it very much!
tfs
Cyrene
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(246) [2008-05-29 21:32] [+]Haha! Very witty photo! Indeed it is a pie! Nice idea and yummy apples!
Good job!
Cyrene
(246) [2008-05-29 21:32] Wow! Perfect timing and title! I like how you caught him licking and "hungry" the wood on the rightmost corner is a bot distracting though and I think that it would be better if you just cropped it off.
Good job though!
tfs!
Cyrene
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(246) [2008-05-29 21:29] Hi Bernarda,
Lovely colors and superb DOF I also like the light coming from the sides.
tfs!
Cyrene
(246) [2008-05-29 21:21] This picture has lots of potential on it. It just needs more work in the Photoshop. Try looking in the forum and see a tutorial by captivelight. It will teach you the basics on doing a post-processing.
God job though!
Keep shooting!
Cyrene
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(246) [2008-05-29 21:18] Haha! This is so cool! Perfect timing and POV! I also like the way the boy posed for this shot he looks very energetic. Well done!
Cyrene
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(246) [2008-05-29 21:15] This is so cool and very interesting. It would be better if you would add a note next time for us aspiring photographers to learn more from someone like you.
^_^
(246) [2008-05-29 21:13] The shot looks artistic but I think this lacks more sharpening and adjustment in the curves.
Good job though!
Very crisp details and image..It feels like I am also inside the train myself. I like the effect of the light coming from the sides.
Next time try to write a note so that we can also learn something from you.
tfs
Cyrene