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pamastro Silver Star Critiquer [C: 11 W: 0 N: 4] (15) [2004-06-07 15:00]

That is one strong mirror look. The water doesn't seem at all like water. It's so still and so reflective. It really seems like a sheet of polished silver. Nice perspective and framing, too, with the dark and the light. And because it seems like silver it looks like you could just walk right out onto the water without hesitation. Nicely done.

C'est un regard fort de miroir. L'eau doesn't semblent du tout comme l'eau. It's tellement encore et si r3fléchissant. Il semble vraiment comme une feuille d'argent poli. Perspective de Nice et encadrer, aussi, avec l'obscurité et la lumière. Et parce qu'il semble comme l'argent elle regarde comme vous pourriez juste marcher bien dehors sur l'eau sans hésitation. Bien fait.

pamastro Silver Star Critiquer [C: 11 W: 0 N: 4] (15) [2004-06-07 14:58] [+]

Wow, very nice colors. The greens are reds are really strong. Some might say over-saturated but I like it. They really give a strong life to this image. The colors also give it a toy feeling that matches its out of water position. Looks like some giant's child could come over those trees and pick up his toy at any moment. Nicely done.

pamastro Silver Star Critiquer [C: 11 W: 0 N: 4] (15) [2004-06-07 14:55]

Very nice. I like how clouds sort of fade into the distance like this. The colors are great. Really nice fluffy textures to the distant clouds, too, as well as great lighting. They seem like fluffy mountain peaks covered with snow somewhere out there far away. I would be tempted to crop the sky out above the top of the clouds. Nicely done.

pamastro Silver Star Critiquer [C: 11 W: 0 N: 4] (15) [2004-06-05 0:38]

I really like the color in this one. The light made a great job lighting the image, too. Very nice reflections on the jet of water and very nice play of light and shade with the ripples of the water. It's another impressive experiment here. You really did a good job.

Belgium
Title: Jet
Jet (14)
kiscool Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 335 W: 76 N: 70] (1427)

Great

pamastro Silver Star Critiquer [C: 11 W: 0 N: 4] (15) [2004-06-05 0:36]

Very interesting here. The water is really stretched here and looks semi-solid. Like a goo of some sort stretching out. Do you have your exif data to share the shutter and aperture settings? I'd be real interesting in that. You got really great reflections on the water, here, too. And such a frozen, yet at the same time not frozen, feel. Very good experiment and well done.

pamastro Silver Star Critiquer [C: 11 W: 0 N: 4] (15) [2004-06-05 0:30] [+]

Very cool work here. You really got the electric across in this shot. It also makes me think of something that could be in a 50s SciFi B-Movie. Like this is the mad scientists laboratory with all these crazy coils and glowing, bright, colors. Very impressive work here. Very cool. Very nicely done.

Canada
Title: tunnel
tunnel (10)
freddd Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 329 W: 54 N: 77] (1909)

Great

pamastro Silver Star Critiquer [C: 11 W: 0 N: 4] (15) [2004-06-05 0:26]

Very cool shot. The undulations of the tunnel and the curves are really nicely captured. It seems very crisp with nice defined lighting and colors. It really draws me in to the photo. With the two black stripes and the very nice quality of the image it makes me think that this is a movie. It has that same, cool, feel. Very nicely captured. It feels like you're standing on the tracks.

pamastro Silver Star Critiquer [C: 11 W: 0 N: 4] (15) [2004-06-05 0:20]

This is a neat shot of fireworks, also. This reminds me of something, too. When I see these lights streaking across the sky with such defined beginnings it makes me think of both the Mir Space Station falling out of orbit or the space shuttle Columbia tragedy. It has that same feel of many pieces all burning up miles and miles up in the atmosphere. It's an interesting effect. Nicely done.

pamastro Silver Star Critiquer [C: 11 W: 0 N: 4] (15) [2004-06-05 0:18]

Very neat photograph. I like the lights going up. Like spirits all in a frenzy rising into the sky. It reminds me of the scene in the movie "Ghostbusters" when all the ghosts escape and go loose into the air. The lines of the fireworks are so organic and natural, no harsh movements to them. That really adds to that feel of perhaps spirits. Very neat effect. Well done.

pamastro Silver Star Critiquer [C: 11 W: 0 N: 4] (15) [2004-06-05 0:13]

Very nice composition. The statue is very well placed. The posture of the statue and the aging give it a very weighed down feel. That it has been guarding but hasn't been very successful. But it still goes on and will continue to go on as the vastness of the sky makes me feel. Great job here.