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perryhooter Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2792 W: 883 N: 6063] (27341) [2009-08-28 12:55] [comment]

Hello John,

Cool subject. I have although to suggest next time to move a bit for a different composition to avoid distracting elements.
1) The longbow pointing out behind his head
2) The tip of his shoe masking his right hand

A step to your right would have avoided that, give more perspective to his position, and you could perhaps have included a bit more the longbow.

To give a more artistic and mediaval mood, I would have tried the B&W or adjust colors slightly for a darker mood.

Just a few thougths.

Cheers !
Robert

perryhooter Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2792 W: 883 N: 6063] (27341) [2009-08-28 12:45]

Hello Alina,

The composition is excellent, the timing and set up is ebeal too. Great Depth of field to capture the whole landscape.
Perspective excellent with the curves leading to the houses.
Well done,
Robert

perryhooter Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2792 W: 883 N: 6063] (27341) [2009-08-28 12:37] [+]

Hello Robert ,

Unusual but effective composition to me. Still I like the moment seized. Nice black and white portrait for an artistic look.
Cheers!
Robert

perryhooter Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2792 W: 883 N: 6063] (27341) [2009-08-18 10:57] [+]

Salut Annie ,

De Matane (^_^). Endroit de prédilection pour une composition optimale. Bien vu et capté ! Jolie carte poostale. Techniquement parfaite à mon humble point de vue.
Amitiés,
Robert

perryhooter Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2792 W: 883 N: 6063] (27341) [2009-08-05 13:53]

Bad Hair Day , But lovely post Hans.

Clear , crisp and shap details. Perfect light too.
No agressivity , very Zen attitude and expression (^_^).
Well done,
Robert

perryhooter Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2792 W: 883 N: 6063] (27341) [2009-08-05 13:50]

Hello Jan1

I am more used to see the other and more familiar side of Ile-de-France. Love the mood captured here with the perfect reflections of this early wind free morning.
Well done !
Robert

perryhooter Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2792 W: 883 N: 6063] (27341) [2009-08-05 13:38]

Hello Karen ,

Sad to read your health problems. Sweet moment captured with the little boy lost in his thoughts. Colorful composition. Just like me when I was his age (^_^).

Take care,
Robert

perryhooter Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2792 W: 883 N: 6063] (27341) [2009-07-23 20:27]

Ola Fernanda,

Lovely mood and cinemascope view. Like the grain here and monochrome composition. The darkness adds to the mystery. Well thought and realized.
Cheers!
Robert

perryhooter Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2792 W: 883 N: 6063] (27341) [2009-07-21 8:06]

Good Day Leica,
A kid with caracter obviously , looking at her determined eyes.
Lovely capture and light set up. Indeed great eye contact between you and her.
Well done, and thanks for the tips.
Robert

perryhooter Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2792 W: 883 N: 6063] (27341) [2009-07-18 17:27]

Hello Leon !

Indeed , we have more and more of these since no pesticide are allowed to be used.....

Effective narrow depth of field to get the focyus on your little guests. The light is also higlighted where it counts to bring them in the spotlight for better visibility.
Well spotted and timed.
Robert