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prfry Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 110 W: 68 N: 95] (570) [2009-11-29 22:50]

Congratulations Dennis,
This composition is a beautiful gift for your new bride! The warm colours and long curves complement each other perfectly. Enjoy your new life together.
Roxanne

prfry Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 110 W: 68 N: 95] (570) [2009-11-29 21:05]

Hi Unni,
The frame you have added makes the photo stand out well. The colours are vibrant and exposure is spot on. Beautiful smoothness of the water surface. Only comment I could add is that perhaps it is a bit too symmetrical - the subject could be in the lower or upper third rather than the centre. Otherwise, a fantastic job!
Roxanne

prfry Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 110 W: 68 N: 95] (570) [2009-11-29 21:03]

Hi Danilo,
The perception of distance here is breathtaking - I feel as though this tunnel just keeps going forever. The clarity and sharpness are excellent, as is the contrast. A very good pov for this scene.
Roxanne

prfry Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 110 W: 68 N: 95] (570) [2009-11-29 21:00]

Hi Mustafa,
An excellent composition here! The main subject stands out so well with the beautiful vibrant colours against the background which is a very interesting gradient of grey to black. Although the subject is very centred, the lines between the pavement frame it well and give it some asymmetry. Well done.
Roxanne

Japan
Title: autumn air
autumn air (20)
AKITA Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1036 W: 81 N: 66] (12454)

Great

prfry Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 110 W: 68 N: 95] (570) [2009-11-29 20:57]

Hello Akihisa, it has been a very long time! I have returned from my prolonged absence having now finished my dental degree. I see your photos have not lost their beauty and you still have your gift for capturing simplicity. I can almost feel the cool temperature and breeze in this scene. Beautiful.
Roxanne

prfry Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 110 W: 68 N: 95] (570) [2009-11-29 20:54]

Marco,
As always, your portraits are always so beautiful and you have a gift for capturing beautiful subjects. I love the simplicity of this composition, the vibrant colour and the striking contrast.
Roxanne

prfry Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 110 W: 68 N: 95] (570) [2009-11-29 20:51] [+]

Greetings Carol! I have returned after a prolonged absence - my dental degree is now over! I was disappointed to see so few comments on this photo. It really is a good picture! Very fitting title - the composition is beautiful in its simplicity. You did a good job with post-processing.
Roxanne

prfry Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 110 W: 68 N: 95] (570) [2009-11-29 20:49] [+]

Hi Bryan,
I have returned after a long absence now that my dental degree is over! Glad to see you are still putting out magnificent work here. The colours you have captured here are amazing - such a striking contrast between the bright green and the purple sky. Although the building is very centred, its interesting architecture distracts the eye from it. A great pov here with the tombstones framing the building. Well done.
Roxanne

prfry Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 110 W: 68 N: 95] (570) [2009-11-29 20:46]

Hi Kath,
I too have been absent for a while finishing my dental degree which is now over! It is great to see your beautiful work on here again! Your children are growing so beautifully so fast - time flies. The emotion in Rhys's eyes is so natural and you have captured the soft textures of his skin and fine hair well. Hope to see more and more!
Roxanne

prfry Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 110 W: 68 N: 95] (570) [2009-11-29 20:42]

Hi Alaettin! Thank you for your best wishes in my final year a while ago - I have now finished my degree! I chose this picture to critique because I was drawn to the beautiful blues of the sky and sea; they are so peaceful. Perfect composition with the light house and the hint of the moon.

Roxanne