Somehow the streaks of lights are distracting specially those on her arm it is too harsh, it's taking away the attention to the subject as well as the object on top left side. Tighter composition could be better.

But if those lights are intended (presumably a reflector or a shiny object bounced), It must be soften or controlled at least for a dramatic shadow play. Model and pose are good..

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Beautiful model, A bit over-exposed on some parts and the wood planks on her feet are disturbing. The lights streaks on her face created some shadows on her eyes that defines her eyebugs, perhaps you can tone that down by letting her face a little bit on the left and shooting her on that side as well..

Mabuhay!

It's like having a lightsaber while shooting..very creative and nice idea to try at home...Lalo na ngayon maiinit dito sa Middle East kakatamad lumabas...

TFS Galing!!!

Roy

WOW! Philippines..Congrats on your milestone on TL as you've inspired many people to show the beauty of our country and this photo still proves that..

I really like your anawangin shots...Mabuhay!!!

Roy

Glad you visit our country and let that journalistic side of of you comes out. Sadly these kind of situations exists everywhere.

I was in the Phils. last July, I never thought many trekkers were meeting up..next time I'll try to catch up.. Hope you had a blast despite of the pollution, poverty and heavy rains...

Warm regards,

Roy

You really like photographing your eye...well that adds to the mystery behind the photograph. Congratulations on your new Camera. Hope to see more what those eyes can deliver. And by the way you have such a beautiful eye...

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Roy

Excellent find..surely this place is forgetten no more after this. Very creative use of textures and post-processing.

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Roy

Hi Jan, that blue eye draws me in to click the thumbnail photo. Impressive idea of having a self-portrait..thanks for your kind words on my posts as well...

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Roy

I'm expecting after that workshop of dustein, somebody eventually will post an image from it...ayun nauna ka..

Congrats bro.the workshop paid-off..

I like the fall colors,the orientation of the picture while it isolates the buildings on the background makes it more dramatic..well done