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salcantai Silver Star Critiquer [C: 32 W: 0 N: 5] (136) [2006-08-31 0:10] [+]

Danny- i like the repetition between waterworks hill dome and dome on court house. Mt.Jumbo in back too far away thus distracting if I assume what you were doing was to repeat the pattern of the dome...
otherwise,nice capture.
David

salcantai Silver Star Critiquer [C: 32 W: 0 N: 5] (136) [2006-08-31 0:08] [+]

Danny- where wasa this taken? I like parts of your shot and want to go play with this myself.
David
PS- i agree with tournesol but would go even further. the left-hand panel is really exciting with the nodules and monochromes. WOW!

salcantai Silver Star Critiquer [C: 32 W: 0 N: 5] (136) [2006-08-31 0:04]

John- great shot. I like the fact that you were able to all-but-stop the tire rotation. boy, if you could get rid of the dead grass or work in ps TO DOWNPLAY IT. I would even crop out the top. up to you but some thoughts for you anyhow. if you can also get rid of the skid mark near the bottom by cutting and pasting portions of the nearby surface that would clean it up. as much man and bike and as little extraneous stuff. he is the focus. he is the action. he is the attention. nothing else. GREAT CAPTURE!
David

salcantai Silver Star Critiquer [C: 32 W: 0 N: 5] (136) [2006-07-26 9:57]

Andrejs- there is a look of innocence and foreboding in this photo. I like the strength of emotion depicted in this shot. there is much tension here that is added by the shadowed character in the background. The photo itself is good. the choice of B&W is strong. Great shot.
David

salcantai Silver Star Critiquer [C: 32 W: 0 N: 5] (136) [2006-07-15 1:13] [comment]

HR- nice shot. I like the contrast and rule of thirds. well composed
david

salcantai Silver Star Critiquer [C: 32 W: 0 N: 5] (136) [2006-07-06 0:06]

dawn- I like the bold colors as well as their contrast. Additionally, I like the POV as well as the conrasting direction of line. good job.
David

salcantai Silver Star Critiquer [C: 32 W: 0 N: 5] (136) [2006-07-04 23:50]

Nice colors and lines. also a wonderful sense of movment created in PS.
Wheee
thanks
David

salcantai Silver Star Critiquer [C: 32 W: 0 N: 5] (136) [2006-07-04 23:45]

Jake- wonderful shot. the capture of these colors play well together. something about the right side of the phot looks hazy. beyond that. nice job.
david

salcantai Silver Star Critiquer [C: 32 W: 0 N: 5] (136) [2006-07-03 23:48]

Miklos- this is a nice capture. The point of view is powerful having chosen to incorporate his feet/footwear. This man appears to be contemplative. had his eyes been downcast I'd have thought he'd given up hope.
David

salcantai Silver Star Critiquer [C: 32 W: 0 N: 5] (136) [2006-06-28 15:55]

Magda- my my. very nice work. I truely love the softness. The photo draws me into it as though I want to splay myself on the luxury of all its petals. the lighting is superb in my mind.
David