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(535) [2007-08-08 11:14] Awesome lens work to get the depth and distortion. Nice mood in those eyes.
(535) [2007-08-08 11:14] Not a bad spot at all. I wonder if its possible to get out onto some of those rocks in the water to shoot from too.
(535) [2007-08-08 11:12] Isn't Flanders from the Simpsons? Nice shot... it needs a tractor in it though...
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(535) [2007-07-17 7:41] [comment] [+]I would prefer it without the effects and to stand as an un manipulated image. Yes a flash would also take away your nice window light coming from the left side.
(535) [2007-07-15 2:19] Not bad at all. I would love to see what happened closer to twilight with the sky.
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(535) [2007-07-15 2:16] very nice, I like the compression with this focal lenth and composition.
(535) [2007-01-20 1:41] Very nice! This is a spot I have been wanting to visit for a long time. This is a very nice view, its a little hazy with the overcast. Very nice work.
Not as clean as the composition like the previous you submitted. You have a lot of foreground rocks that more or less cut through the middle of the image. They lead into the sunset that is also blocked by rock. The process of the image is sound with the whispy water and the sunset sky colors but I think it needs a bolder stronger composition of sorts and a solid subject to the image.
Like your previous image you also have some artifacts in the image especially notible in the top right of this image. I also notice them in your previous too. I think you have some dust on your sensor. Its a pain in the butt but you should go into the original file and clean up those spots and then look at having your sensor swabbed.