Great picture, perfect composition and nice and sharp image. Notes are useful, welcome to TL!

Simon.

I really like the composition here, with the two people either side of the couple. For me the only addition i would make would be the tiniest trimming around the border and perhaps making the photo black and white. I think that would look brilliant.

Simon.

A nice action shot, i love the faces on the children. Wonder what they're scared of?

Pictures not bad, could maybe use a little brightening up and increase in hue perhaps. Notes would be good as well.

Simon.