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smoothdude Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 286 W: 3 N: 101] (1330) [2009-05-18 23:40] [+]

Very nice scene. The only suggestion would be a bit more of a crop on the top..I don't think we need to see much more above the house and water, it would bring the focus more on the house.

smoothdude Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 286 W: 3 N: 101] (1330) [2009-05-18 23:37]

amazing colors and crisp sharp focus here, well done.

smoothdude Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 286 W: 3 N: 101] (1330) [2009-05-18 23:36]

awesome slice of life, the way the men are all framed there looks great and still uses the rule of the thirds.

smoothdude Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 286 W: 3 N: 101] (1330) [2009-05-18 23:35] [+]

Nice portrait here.. I don't know if you were able to really ask her to move around but if you could have brought her a bit further away from that newspaper behind her, and maybe shot at an aperture of more like 2.8 you'd get a bit less Depth of Field and she would be more the focus.. nice shot though.

smoothdude Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 286 W: 3 N: 101] (1330) [2009-05-18 23:32] [comment] [+]

very nice studio shot here.

smoothdude Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 286 W: 3 N: 101] (1330) [2006-08-03 17:25] [comment]

get in the kitchen WOMAN! oh wait she already is.

good shot candyboy

smoothdude Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 286 W: 3 N: 101] (1330) [2006-08-03 17:24] [comment]

looks like a metal album cover or something along those lines..nice mood.

smoothdude Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 286 W: 3 N: 101] (1330) [2006-08-03 17:23] [comment] [+]

such plump fat droplets of water I like it..great macro

smoothdude Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 286 W: 3 N: 101] (1330) [2006-08-03 17:23] [comment]

I like the contrast and the mood set here.

smoothdude Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 286 W: 3 N: 101] (1330) [2006-05-08 17:15]

nice one candyboy. I like the composition and the timeless quality to it.