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smoothdude
(1330) [2009-05-18 23:36]
awesome slice of life, the way the men are all framed there looks great and still uses the rule of the thirds.
smoothdude
(1330) [2009-05-18 23:35] [+]
Nice portrait here.. I don't know if you were able to really ask her to move around but if you could have brought her a bit further away from that newspaper behind her, and maybe shot at an aperture of more like 2.8 you'd get a bit less Depth of Field and she would be more the focus.. nice shot though.
smoothdude
(1330) [2006-08-03 17:25] [comment]
get in the kitchen WOMAN! oh wait she already is.
good shot candyboy
smoothdude
(1330) [2006-08-03 17:24] [comment]
looks like a metal album cover or something along those lines..nice mood.
smoothdude
(1330) [2006-08-03 17:23] [comment] [+]
such plump fat droplets of water I like it..great macro
smoothdude
(1330) [2006-05-08 17:15]
nice one candyboy. I like the composition and the timeless quality to it.

Very nice scene. The only suggestion would be a bit more of a crop on the top..I don't think we need to see much more above the house and water, it would bring the focus more on the house.