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sophie
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(895) [2009-11-15 22:32]
(895) [2009-11-15 22:32] I like your picture. The tombs bring the eyes to a kind of "door", in the sunlith, up right. This picture, compared to the in in WS is better to me. The pale gray, and the vigneting reinforces a feeling of emptiness and nostalgy a cimetery gives me.
(Personally, I would have cloned out the people in the up left...)
Thanks for Sharing!
Sophie
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sophie
(895) [2009-11-09 19:58]
(895) [2009-11-09 19:58] Original, well framed. The right hand is burn, but its a snapshot.
I like it...
Sophie
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Hi,
I like your approach with the light. I agree with manujmehta, the subject could have been in thirds, so the left wall would not take that much place in the compo.
TFS!
Sophie