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specious (12) [2009-05-14 6:56]
Good job, you've found the right situation to take this type of shot! Aiming at the tree tops, it's a fine line between a boring snapshot and something dynamic like this. Must be the right proportion of sky and the way the light is distributed throughout the picture. A real attention-getter.
specious (12) [2009-05-14 6:52]
The angle here is key! Excellent composition, everything seems to sit just right. The light flooding from behind is good stylistically, IMO. All in all, makes me hungry!
specious (12) [2009-05-14 6:50]
I like the composition here, as the shape of the wings goes well with the shape of the leaf. Very crisp -- good DOF control!

I have to give you points for the composition. I would perhaps crop a little bit off the left side, to cut out the dark spot in the top-left. However, if the nose were in good focus too, I think it would take the art in this shot to the next level.
I love the texture of the face, where it's in focus.